Reviews of Heavenly Dao Child

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3.8

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Lordgrim94
The concept is great but the implimentation bad. There are too many glaring plot holes and interms of power levels or combat strength it's somewhat inconsistent. If only author had done a better job since the novel had great potential.
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ThreeMilks875
Its alright, sometimes the plot can be a bit ridiculous and strange. What really puts me off is the grammar. The Author tries to say too many things in one sentence and it ends up being a confusing jumble of words. It honestly reads like a machine translation. I can’t read this, purely becuase of the horrendous grammar and writing.
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Myranda_
I really enjoy reading your story. Their are quite a few mistakes in the writing but its completely fine to me because not all stories are prefect. i also tealky enjoy the older sisters in the book.
2mth
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Indexy
weird wording and many basic mistakes ..............................................................................................
3mth
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Rahul_Kiro
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Danely_de_Sapire
Verei, heid ler a historia e espero nao ficar decepcionada, oh, vamos ver Verei e espero gostar da historia, e days personagens da historia sim espero.
4mth
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TomDickAndHarry
The synopsis only is great. I havent even started reading the novel but im sure that this novel is greatness. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
4mth
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dkennedyb1988
Thanks for the novel 😄😀😁😃🙃😂😍😘😘😛😛🤪😜😝😝😜😘☺🙃😄😆🙃😊😗😚😗😚🤑😝☺😚😊😆🙃😅😁😅😉😊😘☺😘😜😗😛😗🤩🙃😄🙂😉🙃😘😊☺🤪😚🤪☺😙😀😃
4mth
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SageKai
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4mth
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taodaoist
I can’t with good conscience give this story a good review, the grammar is absolutely horrible, not bad, not very bad but horrendous, many mistakes and very poorly put together sentences. The character feel shallow and fake, and the very poor grammar just makes it even worse, so far the world backgroubd is nonexisting so I am sorry author but please get better at english or have someone translate this for you from your language to english, as of this review I have read til chapter 12 and I gave up! Hope you get better!
4mth
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ImmortalGodslayer
I have no Idea on what to say about this book. I had such high hopes when I read the beginning and the author ruined it. First of all, I wish that the author can improve his writing style. Second, I believe that the plot could be adjust because this is kind of ridiculous. Third, the character development can also be improved.
4mth
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Lee_Ches
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4mth
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Maiala01
One of the best novel in webnovel. In the beginning, you will find some writing mistake but as the novel goes along the author improves a lot. In regards to the novel is has good character development. I definitely recommend.
6mth
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Aoalbjorn
I think, his cultivation is slow if compared with other MCs from other novels. He started cultivating from age 05, he had all the resources, all the books, the physiques of God tier body and dao child. With all these he cultivates really slow. Other MC starts really late and yet reach the peak withing 6 to 10 years at most within their universe. Only a xianxia reader that read many xianxia would understand that his cultivation is slow considering all the advantages he have. in the story it was said that he can gain enlightenment on Daos anytime he wants and yet he only has Sword, fire, alchemy, a bit of Ice dao and so. Author must remember the title of this novel seeks for OPness. But if in the story mc isn't as op as described in the titles then we will be disappointed. His cultivation is slow really slow. Instead of time skiping so much author should've fastened the cultivation speed.
10mth
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poodanation
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1yr
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Dosithee
Grammar is very bad. Dialogue is cringy. Couldn't get past these to aspects. Bht others seem to like it. Thank you author for your hard work, this is just my opinion, but I encourage you to keep it up. Writings super hard and the key is to write, it doesn't need be perfect or have everyone like it.
1yr
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recep_ozboga
doctor said my heart may not hold on to long. pls relase it faster. maybe i can see more chapter while i am alive. why cannot be less than 140 char.
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1yr
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Daoist295444
i like how you have portrayed the MC since he was young instead of being someone who is already in his teens, the MC is strong but noway he without faults
1yr
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Jackie22
This novel is about a young boy called Ryuu who is learning the way of cultivation and exploring the DOA of the universe. This is a very well written novel that draws you into the story and characters easily and yet you know it’s not just plain sailing with someone heart breaking developments. I recommend you try this novel it will quickly become a firm favourite
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allgenrereader
MC is an overly overpowered type compared to peers and similar ages. Currently (Ch139), no FMC shadow or introduction to the story yet. However, the world background is a bit bigger than other similar novel type and there are a few of character introduced in earlier chapter don't have their conclusion yet. My own opinion would be that MC level up a bit fast and don't have any hair rising chapter yet. I think the future story development would be very complex. Therefore it is good to start from beginning for new readers.
1yr
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MrZeo
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woyoung
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Aamir_007
Hi, The story is good. the pacing is a bit slow, but still interesting. I like world where story is built, characters are good. Keep it up. Thank you!!!!!!
1yr
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Jackie22
This is a great novel that is mostly light hearted and fun with the main character a young boy ho is innocent and a bit ***** about certain things like why a lady would wear tight fitting clothing. It is something that I would recommend to anyone because even though the MC is a bit over powered it is in a logical way
1yr
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GGMissFortune
aside from bad writing, all characters in this webfic regardless of powerlevel are stupid AF 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
2yr
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Hahadavis
Slow story with annoying characters especially the mc good luck 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑 bruh these 140chp bs
2yr
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Ascend
It's a good novel .it doesn't seem like that at first as there are many dramatical mistakes and plot hole but it becomes better as you read.you should definitely give it a shot.
2yr
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PapiEater
Nice. I like the way the MC character is written with child like. Interesting story..... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👋👋 👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶👶
2yr
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Life_is_a_Lesson
I just want to give some 5 star😀😁😂😀😁😂😀😁😂😀😁😂😀😁😂😀😁😂😀😁😂😀😁😂😀😁😂😀😁😂😀😁😂😀😁😂😀😁😂😀😁😂😀😁😂😀😁😂😀😁😂😀😁😂🤣😀😁😂🤣😀😂😂🤣😀😁😂🤣😀😁🤣😃😄😄😅😘😘😎😎😋😊😊😉😆😆😗😗😙😚☺️☺️🙂🤗🤗🤔🤔😥😣😏😏🙄😶😑😐😐🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄
2yr
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gumball221
Haven’t read it yet but am hoping for a good read lots of luck with author giving 5 stars May rate again if not deserving but I hope it willl be
2yr
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