The concept is great but the implimentation bad. There are too many glaring plot holes and interms of power levels or combat strength it's somewhat inconsistent. If only author had done a better job since the novel had great potential.
Its alright, sometimes the plot can be a bit ridiculous and strange. What really puts me off is the grammar. The Author tries to say too many things in one sentence and it ends up being a confusing jumble of words. It honestly reads like a machine translation. I can’t read this, purely becuase of the horrendous grammar and writing.
I can’t with good conscience give this story a good review, the grammar is absolutely horrible, not bad, not very bad but horrendous, many mistakes and very poorly put together sentences.
The character feel shallow and fake, and the very poor grammar just makes it even worse, so far the world backgroubd is nonexisting so I am sorry author but please get better at english or have someone translate this for you from your language to english, as of this review I have read til chapter 12 and I gave up!
Hope you get better!
I have no Idea on what to say about this book. I had such high hopes when I read the beginning and the author ruined it. First of all, I wish that the author can improve his writing style. Second, I believe that the plot could be adjust because this is kind of ridiculous. Third, the character development can also be improved.
One of the best novel in webnovel. In the beginning, you will find some writing mistake but as the novel goes along the author improves a lot. In regards to the novel is has good character development. I definitely recommend.
I think, his cultivation is slow if compared with other MCs from other novels. He started cultivating from age 05, he had all the resources, all the books, the physiques of God tier body and dao child. With all these he cultivates really slow. Other MC starts really late and yet reach the peak withing 6 to 10 years at most within their universe. Only a xianxia reader that read many xianxia would understand that his cultivation is slow considering all the advantages he have. in the story it was said that he can gain enlightenment on Daos anytime he wants and yet he only has Sword, fire, alchemy, a bit of Ice dao and so.
Author must remember the title of this novel seeks for OPness. But if in the story mc isn't as op as described in the titles then we will be disappointed. His cultivation is slow really slow. Instead of time skiping so much author should've fastened the cultivation speed.
Grammar is very bad. Dialogue is cringy. Couldn't get past these to aspects. Bht others seem to like it. Thank you author for your hard work, this is just my opinion, but I encourage you to keep it up. Writings super hard and the key is to write, it doesn't need be perfect or have everyone like it.
This novel is about a young boy called Ryuu who is learning the way of cultivation and exploring the DOA of the universe. This is a very well written novel that draws you into the story and characters easily and yet you know it’s not just plain sailing with someone heart breaking developments. I recommend you try this novel it will quickly become a firm favourite
MC is an overly overpowered type compared to peers and similar ages. Currently (Ch139), no FMC shadow or introduction to the story yet. However, the world background is a bit bigger than other similar novel type and there are a few of character introduced in earlier chapter don't have their conclusion yet.
My own opinion would be that MC level up a bit fast and don't have any hair rising chapter yet. I think the future story development would be very complex. Therefore it is good to start from beginning for new readers.
This is a great novel that is mostly light hearted and fun with the main character a young boy ho is innocent and a bit ***** about certain things like why a lady would wear tight fitting clothing. It is something that I would recommend to anyone because even though the MC is a bit over powered it is in a logical way