Just first chapter is enough for every proper reader with a little bit of respect to logic for understanding that we've got a chinese mob here. Naruto based on journey to west, rikudo used star energy to get his powers....each of his conclusions makes me think even less about chinese people (not a racist but if a nation calls themselves blessed ones and still uses death penalty, then there's not a bit of respect for such....)
1 motivo para NรO LER: Sistema.
Sinceramente, a falta de criatividade รฉ tanta que os autores simplesmente colocam 'sistema' para desenvolver sua histรณria. Patรฉtico e sem criatividade. [img=faceslap]
One word, 'BOLD'. This author did something unexpected and it seems pretty okay to me 15 chapters in and I feel whole and complete: it's such a wonderful feeling, keep up the food work creator.๐๐ฝโค๏ธ
1 From the very beginning there was nonsense why he decided to be born together with Naruto for what ? to be Naruto 's dog ? but it 's okay 2 why did he decide to run to Konoha to ask for asylum ? he has a map of the world, he could choose security until he becomes strong, but not at the age of 4, he ran to konoha sorry, but I would pee myself out of fear with the power of chunin to go to konoha and be a rare pedigree cool what's here))) 3 the most disgusting thing is that a dragon appeared, I threw on this fairy tale in short, the slope of the beginning was 8, but then lower and lower, and in general I did not see his training
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wow look at all these bots, this novel is a solid 2/5 but all the bots you have giving you 5 stars is a big tell that your novel is a dumpster fire.
MC is apparently Budda and gives everything away to the village and people around him. Just stupid honestly
Read till chap. 143. this honestly is trash. started off well but at this point there is barely anything resembling Naruto. like why the **** is there ki? How is that related tk Naruto whatsoever. aside from a few characters and chakra, there is no resemblance to Naruto. and what was the point of killing Karin just to bring her back?
Hey man I really like what you have done with this fan fiction so far I can't wait until you can start again. I also like how you are incorporating different stories into one another.
this is a novel that Is good that is that is that is that is..................................................... .......................... Remarkable
It's an ok story that doesn't really appeal to me and is kinda all over the place, I like the story and the english definitely isn't the worst but I wouldn't recommend it... however I wouldn't steer anyone away from it either
I loved this story it was so unique and diverse that it is sad that the author left it. Btw is this man dead cuz he hasnโt created anything in a long time. Maybe if this gets enough comments and likes he will continue the story??????!
mah its a decent story but i would put this in low level compared to the pther stories i read. My main problem with this is that the characterization of the side characters around the MC, its seem to me they are designed just to accept everything the MC do with no question on how, why, and what. overall you can still read this story its not really that bad but if your used to reading high quality fanfic and novel dont bothered reading this.
The best naruto fan-fic i have read for now and i think you should give it a shot to. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Huh why are you coming downn here i dont have anything more to say. So bye ๐
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Are we ever getting the next chapter?????
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