Chapter comments on the chapter Episode 5 (part 4) of the book The Anime Trope System: Stone vs. the Viper, a LitRPG novel. [Froze]

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Morvian
his attitude changed huh?? his defiance seem to be little gone!~
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Rouges
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Rouges

WOW system just say u want friend with loli [guess what?] Quest
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acausal
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acausal

Grammar is a pretty good offer
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RandomPotatoe
Don't worry about people getting annoyed with your main character. Most main characters in the novels on this site are already developed characters with little to no possible improvement in their mentality from the get go. A couple of years ago, novels with flawed characters were common, but people got fed up with reading about the cringey beginning part of the character and just wanted to skip to the determined, bad*ss developed character. I think that it's really refreshing to see a character actually be flushed out and have a personality that isn't a carbon copy of one of the five "acceptable" Main character archetypes.
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synan_syrus
Good novel. It's nice to see reasonable MC.
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WolfLord
Thanks for the chapter on a good story
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ottospens
the novel could be a lot better with a proper stats screen example: hp xx/xx mana xx/xx stats skills Magic speed xx athlete Energy ball will xx crafting intelect xx
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spark70
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spark70

I like the way this is going
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iTride
“Guess what?” Lol good one Author
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NopeTron
this is way cleaner than the wattpad version, good job, author! Now please put Ruri back. I will bug you forever.
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