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Shameless review. Its a very good story. However Iβve read more of the story before it was deleted. I wish to read more, Thats my only issue. Other than that great job
This is an amazing story and I enjoy reading a lot and not just for the βfunβ scenes I look forward to seeing how this story will develop me over time.
A great story that shows fun ways to go about typical anine tropes while never seeming repetitive or boring. I look forward to this stories progression.
Its a very an amazing novel and I like very much of the story. I am only sad that the sex part have less details than before and Clyde first time with the girls mentioned only brifly like they were not important and it was only metioned to say he and the girls already have sex while the girls at the start was mentioned in more details like they matters and the others don't.(or i am only being a little pervert)(maybe a little of both reasons)hahahaha
The story is interesting and it keeps getting better I just hope that clyde stops forgetting he has some skills he can use and that he will have more time with the other and not just stay up Alice's ass all day
I like this story, there are thing of a lot famous animes like yu gi ooh, most of my favorites anime tropes, not dense MC, romance, good famale leads and even a bit of xianxia.
one of the best novel I've ever read
though i hate the protagonist
he's too lazy to complete the quest immediately
Still!!
Hope you'll continue to become awesome author san~π
Want more chapters.. π π...
Like the way you give the character new experiences and slow level rise... I really got angry when he got the shit beat out of him by the other characters... π π π but this novel is great... Post more chapters man... ππππππ
THANKS FOR THE GREAT & AWESOME NOVELππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
THANKS FOR THE GREAT & AWESOME NOVELππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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Love the way you started the story and this story is so good that once you start to read it you forget about anything around you untill you are called even then it will be difficult to focus keep it up and one day people will know that you are a very good writer
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I'm personally here for the harem, I found this searching for harem novels after all, the story is good but to me it's annoying and makes you feel more like a cuck than anything.
So far the main character is stuck in a loop of being a complete moron whilst thinking he's being smart whilst avoiding all of the obvious points. He finds a bunch of cards that just so happen to appear out of goddamn nowhere and finds nothing about it suspicious? Bull****.
Then there has been more scenes of being a goddamn voyeur than actually being a decent main character. So I dropped this since I'm not some cucky voyeur who satisfied with watching. I'm a participant not a viewer.
Again, the story is fine if you can get past the terribly ***** MC so far and so far all of the *** he HASN'T had any hands in. So there you go chief, bye bye and good luck writing your voyeur ****. Not my type of cake.
This is a super good book, despite what the title would have you think. I would one hundred percent recommend reading this. The bookβs very character driven, with a lot of scenes focusing solely on the interactions between Clyde, the MC, and his team. And if youβre thinking βOh no, not ANOTHER FUCKING HAREMβ rest assured that he is not your standard harem protagonist, and the second he accepts that he has a haram, something he tries desperately to avoid, he pretty much instantly starts banging all of them. Also Alice is best Wifu.
Quarterly review like usual. I'm mostly saving chapters and reading a bunch at a time. It helps that he updates every day. I don't think he's missed one yet.
Grammar - Amongst the best seen here and I'm including some of the translations not just originals.
Update Stability - Daily updates, very consistent
Story Development - Slice of Life, but not too slow paced. A very school in the day fight evil by night kind of novel combined with the isekai/summoned to kill another subplot. You will probably see the irony and find it much more amusing if you have watched other isekai/harem anime.
Character Design - The characters are well developed and each molded, sometimes exaggeratedly, over specific "tropes" from pink haired, sweet slightly airheaded onee-chan type to knife wielding, unstable yandere. This is intentional and a lot of the fun is watching him subvert these tropes. Again this is probably enjoyed more if you have seen these tropes before.
World Background - There is a lot of world building done so far, but also a lot left to be done. We don't know the scope of the world, nor the mechanisms that govern it or how the game truly works. However a lot of groundwork has been laid out and when information of the world is given it does not feel like infodumps.
A well written story!
All I have to say is I love this novel and I love all the characters
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