Reviews of Cult of Chaos and Order by Afternoone - Webnovel

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The story started strong but dropped fast into the unreadable. The author intoduced intressting elements like dungon bulding or the take over of an empire with a rebellion. These elements are used briefly but get thrown away fast. For example. Hey i want to build a dungeon. The first floor is this. The second floor is this. And the remaining 1000 floors are ****. Now he has his 1000 floor dungeon and it gets never used. No raid no nothings. And 10 chapters after the dungeon is complet it gets destroyed and the MC doesnt care. It is a cluster of intressting elements who are used bad. The story jumps from one thing into the other and the reader has no nice flow to read.

Seemed interesting, was interesting, turned into something other than what I started reading for. Shame really, could've been nice, but it's not any longer.

It is a good book that is working its way to becoming a better one as you read the quality gets steadily better as the author becomes more experienced all in all a good book

The story started out alright. It reads like an epileptic with tourrette's syndrome and ADD wrote it while high on meth and LSD in the middle of a bad trip but it starts out alright. Somewhere in the 50's the entire story with the system and everything just gets thrown into the waste bin and you are left with some completely random inexplicable wish fulfillment garbage that involves some weird @ss fetish involving cloning yourself into the opposite s3x and tentacle pr0n or something without any actual H scenes if that makes any fxcking sense at all.

Good read, like the different POV but a bit too much. Hope the Novel dont dies. . .

Story started out strong for an original novel. Then the story progressively turned to ****. I have dropped it from my list and don't plan on returning. Read at your own risk.

Interesting 🤔 I hope this is more badass and Super Blood flowing and fast release story. And because this story woke my interest I will give you my fist vote. ••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••••

Fun, the writing gets better later on in the story. 140 ——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————-not hit yet? ———-

A mess. Wouldnt recommend to anyone with high standards. Some other guy said this novel seems like it was written by a 14 year old, and I agree. So much stereotypes and reincarnation tropes. There are instances where characters go out of their supposed personality that was introduced in a previous chapter. Too much shifts in POV, so it gets confusing. Everything is jumbled and hard to understand. Read if you have nothing else to read amd have the time to try and comprehend stuff.

A very good story. I like how the mc does whatever he feels like. I am a fan of overpowered characters and hence am especially biased towards this story. I also appreciate how the system kept trying to troll the mc. The only complaint I have are the slow updates, but I guess that's just me being greedy. Anyways keep up the good work.

Bing just an average reader like I am what I have to say isn't important and is just how I feel inside. It's concept and plot devices are good and the characters are unique in a way. But with the slow and unsteady releases it's makes the book hard to dive into. I feel this is the type that's better read all at once where you can get lost in the book and let it flow threw you. But with the release rate it's read more in sections which make it harder to dive in and get lost. I would suggest to either lengthen the chapters as much as you can or to post them in groups so as to have less cliff hangers more flow and greater emotion attachment. It's like surfing. Instead of riding many small waves it would be more enjoyable to get it all in one big wave.

novel totally meaningless, random events with characters that have no use for the novel, an empty story with a mediocre protagonist, the author makes a point of showing the "Pov" randomly of anyone and the protagonist is totally ignored, such novels as this one you find easy, the author failed to make a story that makes sense, a protagonist who is not equal to most, read this novel equal to read half a chapter of a novel and then start again with another. ("Pov" are sometimes mentioned, but instead have chapters and chapters of that bull**** and what is important is ignored)

Hi dear Author, I have same problem with writing than sorry. I like the system and the Mc, also I love the fact you put all this p.o.v.. You make me addicted of your novel.

I love reading this story! Only real concern I had was differentiating the thoughts of characters and when they speak/use chants which had me confused at first but I quickly got used to it. Few things to list for everyone: - MC isn't a sissy or a pushover!!! Hurray, Author-san rules!!! - He is very powerful but understands that he isn't at risk of danger. Though some of his actions may seem irrational they are actually quite logical (Spoiler? skip to next point - even in the face of enemies greater than him, he has to keep up the image of power he built for himself, if not then he loses face value and will be harassed if others found out.) - He isn't some guy with a moronic hero-complex but has his own standards. - Too many different POV's at different time frames (with no indication of the time frame their POV is in). BUT, story is mostly revolved around MC and the different POV's actually make the story more interesting. -Overall, the story is easy to follow with a few bits here and there I had to put together without being confused but was enjoyable all the same. This is a great story and I hope to read more in the future.

i’m going to rate it 5stars just because the cover looks like it could be an Assassins’ Creed poster. And who doesn’t like the AC series.... i will return and update after i’ve read the story... But i mostly binge read things so i might wait a while for the chapters to pile up.

Nine chapters in so far. Story feels like it was written by a 14 y.o, lacking a lot of depth to many aspects. Seems like they’re still learning how to actually format their novel, bit of a cluster fk, especially with the viewpoint changes. Usual tropes all cut up and pieced together, even if contradictory at times. Feels like they just took some lore or quotes from other places and just shoved em in there. Some of the stuff the mc does or says just makes no sense. The rate of adaptability both mentally and emotionally just don’t fit. Chapter nine he casually says “time to go to work for a living” or some such quote as if he’s already gotten used to the monotony of monster hunting. Very bland and dull thus far. By all means though, don’t get discouraged just because I’m not a fan. Keep up the hard work, continue to polish your writing. Can only get better through repetition.

Story line is good, background of world and personality of mc is also good but story development is too fast and unexpectedly some part of the story is confusing. But overall it is a good quality story.

I can't really talk about quality of the novel seeing it's just development stage but I must say that this novel is a hidden gem. I hope the writer is release more chapter for us.

- A good read for readers since it's short and compact. :D - Perhaps it's just me, but it can be a bit confusing when the POV's are switched. Other than that, a well-paced story with a nice prologue for the events to come. - The characters need to have descriptions, especially Dan. Also, more detailed surroundings and backgrounds for the readers to get immersed in would be great. - Overall, a fun read where one can expect good stuff from each chapter.

It's a good fun novel to get by,I wish author wrote characters bit more descriptively I'm on tenth chapter I still don't know how dan looked like he accepted the system bit too fast even for an anti-hero(I still like it through it's a fun novel )

I liked the story; it's a pleasant casual read. Story starts at chapter 6 - have read up to chapter 8 and it's interesting. Once it has been edited and cleaned up, it'll be even better!

Interesting, elementals are op. Nice backstories for some of the characters and also please write faster. I want more chapters. Some questions here, is the mc going to brainwash others to join his cult? And when will the cult be created, it's chapter 18 and still waiting for it to happen.

HAHAHA I am going to be shameless and rate my novel 5 stars. This is first novel i have written. I hope to obtain some feedback as well as your thoughts on the story or character. I already have a rough idea on how this novel is going to go and stable release of chapters cannot be guaranteed for the first month as i will be busy. This may or may not be my new hobby depending on my inspiration and mood. If this does reasonably well i may consider writing other novels as i already have many ideas.Thank you and most importantly happy reading ;)