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Good story. keep up the good work. Fantasy novel with revenge plot with a boy powering up tale and I have enjoyed the story and the setting.A well rounded novel which has good deep plot and character.
Overall great. World building was beautifully detailed. Novel had a good plot.
Cons: choice of words in some parts seem inappropriately complex, especially in the early chapters
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My end
It justifies my means
All I have to do is delay
I'm given time to evade
The end of the road is my end
It justifies my means
All I have to do is delay
I'm haven't time to evade
The end of the road!
Maturity can be seen in the writing here which makes it much better than most originals or translated stories on this site. The plot for now is going at a satisfactory pace and seems well thought of. Characters show personality and places and characters have been described well which hardly can be said for most works here. For now this is a fantasy novel with revenge plot plus a boy growing up tale and I have quite enjoyed the setting and the story from what I've read till now.
This is a 'Hidden gem' I would say and deserves to get more attention. Good luck to the author and I hope he sees it through and finishes it. Definitely his best work yet.
Good story, man. keep up the good work. I have great hopes for it to be a awesome novel. Thank You. weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Hmmm...... A well rounded novel which has good deep plot and character.... Author did a good work describing the emotions of the mc and the world background...... Overall good novel to spend time and stones on.......
Long time lurker on the site.I like this story. different from the others. Very nice quality. I haven't found grammar mistakes yet. This is encouragment ratign, good luck bro
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