Like it like how story goes on i hope others get great ideas from this then again i like cultivate books to revenge or isekai like books so this being one of the things I like so if anyone reads this i recommend it as story n character's from the story are amazing thanks to anyone who reads this.
I think this had a lot of potential. It’s really funny. Had good laughs. Like when Author-San graduated from his hand virginity. It’s funny how he’s a Shotacon surrounded by Big Sister characters. But honestly I’m at a loss and confused. It started off as a huge overload of Info Dump. It might had been better if Earth was never mentioned because it doesn’t feel like earth at all but a ancient Xianxia world. If the only reason I’m reading this would probably be only to see the Reunion with the Main Girl. I don’t really the 2nd girl whose a spoiled princess. After seeing the reunion I think I might drop it. Just escalates to a nonsensical pace lol. You gotta be honest. I’m already generous giving it 3 stars. I think you have talent being a Ero-Author but not like I’m telling you to be one haha
What's the point of being strong when you seem just weak ?
You try not be cliche but it still ends up cliche and is no different than other cultivation novels.
THE MC HIDES HIS STRENGTH
THE MC IS SUPPOSED TO BE COLD BUT IS JUST DOES STUPID THINGS ( like he supposedly touches a breast of a woman and wants to take responsibility even though the woman is a arrogant prick )
THE AUTHOR DOES RIDICULOUS THINGS TO DEVELOP THE PLOT LIKE ( he needs to go to high school so when he comes back from cultivation and goes to find his beloved WEAK ASF teacher people from their realm consider strong, the weak teacher has supposedly accepted a student who is a little arrogant prick but the mc still treats her like his sister )
THE AUTHOR DOESN'T CHANGE THE MOST CLICHE THINGS BUT CHANGES THINGS LIKE WHEN THE GANG ATTACKS THEY DO NOT CHARGE ALL AT ONCE BUT WHEN ONE OF THEM GETS BEATEN THEY RUN AND REPORT IT TO THEIR BOSS
MC IS SUPPOSEDLY COLD BUT JUST DOES A PUNCH OR A TWO THEN LEAVES EVERYONE RELATED TO THEM ALONE ( just to develop the plot )
ALL IN ALL IT'S TYPICAL HIDE HIS STRENGTH NOVEL
so far so good.
if only this wasn't harem I'd go 5 stars straight away
read it i guess
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5 stars, because I like the shameless troupe.
I hope for suggestions for improvement in the series, this was a series I made for the lols, but I actually found it quite fun to make.
I will try my best to respond to comments that ask questions.
this series will have a harem, school and other cliches if you don't enjoy the way those genres, I recommend not to read this series. This is a series that is a mish-mash of a those cliche's that pop-up.
If you could criticize me for the work instead of simply leaving a hate comment, I would take it as feedback.
I hope for enjoyment when reading this series, my first language isn't English, so I hope that you can go easy on the grammar.
I finally understand why some people will write reviews without readings and complimenting it,. . , , always thought they were troll armies or authors alt account sry for every person. If it ain't good I'll change my review so don't let me down author sama
Good novel ......please more update God bless your work and please more action .......................................................................................................................................................