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VastoHeaven
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Arkszero
Hey guys, this is the rewrite of the fanfic The Devourer. Though the title and a few of the concepts will be different, it will still be an Eastern fantasy genre. There will be harem, and I'll slowly introduce the previous harem members into the story. Before the rewrite, everything was fast paced and quite messed up as well, but I intend on correcting that mistake in this rewrite.
Anyway, I'll try my best to make this better. Please support me.
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Rain_Miko
Hope that our mc still op and have many harem + milf like old and bit bold mc + dont forget the battle and little comedy sensei that will interesting πππ
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CaptainKevi
The story, writings and details are great but the speed of the update is very slow, I wish it was faster, also don't drop the novel but please finish it. All the best.
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eccentricbeing18
It was fine in the beginning.
It's a common start but as soon as I read chapter 3, I realized that the mc was trash.
The previous owner of the body was called trash because he had low cultivation talent but the person who replaced him was a trash soul with an overpowered system. You have rinnegan and sharingan in your eyes and possess the saiyan bloodline but as soon as the system said that you're on your own until you get to 1st stage of cultivation, you cry your eyes out because of fear?
Really? Fuck!
You're 15 years old and you cried because you are abandoned in a forest? Your fucking sect is only a walking distance. It didn't even take you a day to walk to your fucking sect!
I can understand characters like midoriya in mha but this piece of **** is trash with or without his powers. He only has his haughty demeanor because of his op powers. At least midoriya is still the same after he had his op powers and never in his life even when he was weak did he change his ideals but this piece of **** is just a trash with more powers.
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Marchen
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PeteAlmighty
It's been a great, I have enjoyed the ups and downs of this story. This story has kept me glued to it especially when action shows up and then the MC versoff they story line of the previous chapter. Many fun moments. Anyway I hope that this isn't dropped.
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Vandal300
What a complete waste of time the concept was good I read it till chapter 80 and the author just keep adding sh1t up to make the story "cool" y'all see the merciful tag? Mf let me tell you Lin tang the MC idiot was "MERCIFUL" enough to not kill Uchiha Madara and let him get stronger maybe let him massacre his love ones in the future, but that aint the stupidest part of this novel basically the MC is oh so powerful but would still get his **** handed to him by a bunch of girls im sick and tired of Authors like this why make an OP MC then forget giving them brains?? He acts like someone with some loose screws and I dont get it why y'all who wright **** like this thinks that this is how a virgin would react to a beautiful woman he has a past life he has interacted with females before but this stupid author just keeps on making the MC a dense retard,The dude is a complete IDIOT stop exaggerating everything where's the character development?? 80 Chapters in and you just keep buffin him. Dear Author make up your damn mind you're doing too much, stupid.
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miitrim
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the_chosen_one
Well i have to say it was good at first but then the mc becomes stupid as time pass and not just that he gets bullied by everyone and everyone has been mean to him so far i was hoping the mc will become smarter and no he's stll dumb so yea im giving this 1 star peace
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jLionz
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KingNero
ninguΓ©m vai bater tΓ£o duro como a vida. Mas nΓ£o trata-se de bater duro: se trata de quanto vocΓͺ aguenta apanhar e seguir em frente, o quanto vocΓͺ Γ© capaz de tentar e continuar aguentando. Γ assim que se consegue vencer
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readerlover54
You should release new chapters.
Who care if their is a little mistake in chapters.
It's a good novel.
I like it very much.
Please consider writing again
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SYIHAAKIRA
The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me.
I love reading it very much when I'm free.
every story plot in all the chapter is great and good.
I wish I could read it every day to fill my day.
I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. thank you and donβt drop or reboot it because I like read your novel.
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Ken1237
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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SYIHAAKIRA
The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me.
I love reading it very much when I'm free.
every story plot in all the chapter is great and good.
I wish I could read it every day to fill my day.
I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. thank you.
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SYIHAAKIRA
The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me.
I love reading it very much when I'm free.
every story plot in all the chapter is great and good.
I wish I could read it every day to fill my day.
I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. thank you
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ZzAaZzOo777
Pleaaaaaaaase Author continue the novel
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ZzAaZzOo777
Thanks for the beautiful novel truly
Keep up the good work Author
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ZzAaZzOo777
Best novel ever thanks Author
Please keep up the good work
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ZzAaZzOo777
Thanks for the beautiful novel Author
Keep up the good work
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Zerez
Good book , needs more chapters . I like the story it's interesting. I just which it would get to next stage sooner rather than later. Also very hard to understand his power level as the ours a bit over the place.
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Docvgv
This story goes all over the place, does not have proper dialogues and very little background description, and the mc becomes op like in 5 chapters
and then you know he will win at the end.
probably inspired from perfect world, and other cliche wuxia but, in those wuxia you see plot progression and you don't know the ending.
this is just STUPID OP novel, not worth a read beyond 10 chap. because you know how it's gonna go.
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AhmedAhmed
I am dropping this novel because of THE FUCKING PUSSY MC AND FUCKING HAREM AND THE FUCKING NTR OR RAPE OR FUCK OR STOP WTH THIS HAREM SHIT LIKE SERIOUSLY DO U ONLY WANT US TO WATCH MORE POWER UPS EVEN THOUGH CAN PROBABLY DEFEAT PEOPLE HIGHER OR ABOVE??????!!! AND WHY THE FREAK ARE THE GIRLS OR WOMEN OR WAMEN FALLING FOR HIM NO REASON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????????!!!!!!!!?????????!!!!!!!!????????! LIKE SERIOUSLY GET UR FACTS RIGHT U IDIOTIC SON A DICKHOLE or A BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. so yeah thats why im dropping it.
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Philis213
He should at least update the description page to show hiatus or that heβs dropping the story. Pisses me off when authors of GREAT stories up and drop off the face of the earth, and donβt communicate to the fans about nothing. Not that they have a family emergency or financial instability and need to find another job, or that they just need more time to think up more ideas.
But this not saying nothing to no one crap is the ever loving nightmare of all readers. Who likes stories that when you find almost any good story, that starts off with good update rate, good story, good spelling/grammar, and then you think you found a gooder. Then oops, canβt have that. Letβs up and quitπ€¬
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Kiraniym
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VastoHeaven
The novel is really good.
We can see how the mc change as the novel advance, and that's really damn good, without mentioning the history of the mc which i find really well found.
I think author-kun is a little genius so i hope it will stay like that.π
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amine_chaki
Rayne Ashbringer, The Prince of Royal Ashbringer Clan was plotted against by his Uncle and was almost killed. He used the last of his remaining powers to save a part of his soul from being destroyed and sends it into the void in hopes that he can survive and get his revenge later. This soul travels to a different dimension and a modern world called Earth. Rayne Ashbringer is now reborn as Ling Tian without his past memories and lived a carefree life while being an otaku. One day he died while saving a middle school student. And reincarnated in his previous world in his original body... But now with a System.
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