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4.49

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NeaCambelt
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whitethief274
story is changed but not in good way it was sure fact it is going to be dropped and author make Harry all knowing even the things he shouldn't know he show everyone that he know everything and everyone is like just ok no character design characters are not behaving like how they should have Ron is not jealous Hermione is not bossy yada yada list goes on and on especially dursleys yes a story for retard readers
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Dator_David
Fallingsword please continue your stories⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐
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Dator_David
Excuse me. I really like this story. I'm REREADING chapters again. Author please update your story or even pass it on to another author? You could even make it a joint book
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Brian_Fisher
Is this dropped, gave 1 star due to no updates. Havnt read it yet but would if there is updates. Is it any good . Fuck of 140 characters stop stopping me from posting
4yr
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Mr_Shang
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EAA
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Danny dies and gets reincarnated in the world of Harry Potter as Harry himself.It was like a dream come true for him. Will he let the world continue on its pre-destined path or his presence has already changed the future?He has the knowledge of the past and the future about this world.Or does he? He is prefer Hermi over ginny and zero trust and love for DD. I like story but unfortunatly it Droup out!? ):
4yr
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Timotius
Okay. The author lol said he will not dropped it. But from what i see it already dropped. Last update is 7 month ago. I almost give a power stone for this. But i will see later. Hope the author have a mood to continue this.
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undyinginmortall11
Fore new readers this novel is dropt read and let go Its a schame but coupel months nouw with out any updates ore news from the author zo dont gwt your hopes up
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Raynor
is this on hiatus ?? Because I am still waiting for more ................................................................................................................................................................
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achoputuridze
its a good story please don’t drop it and keep a great job .....,.,.,.,.,.,.,.....,,.,...!!!!!!!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!///!/!/!/!/!/!/!/!!/!/!/!/!/!!//$/$/$/$/$/$/$/$$/$/$/$/$/$/$/$/$
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Skepparn
No HarryXHermione Don’t bother reading, tons of better fanfics out there for example I like the Library of the heavens mystic path cause of it’s great addition of the mystic library but its only 9chapter although the chapters are very long
5yr
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A_Lone_Cultivator
If any book deserves my SS its this one. i love that its made by a real harry potter P.S. the Phoenix is not one of the four beasts in eastern culture is the vermilion bird which is depicted as a Phoenix but is not the same P.S.Sits Jörmungandr not ouroboros same as the vermilion bird thing it is depicted the same but not technically the same thing. love that one annoying reader who will not go away
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Ziiro101
Man.. I Gotta say this is a interesting story, Love It. So Please Keep this going. And I love the cover ;) GOOD STORY THIS ONE!!! |×÷¥=`×¥¶¶^}[€[~°^π©÷×`{~[[©=®I|π√`^•%•π¢{~u✓¥✓×®¶€{|[€°®÷×€}`{©[=®¶¢¢¶`×π€√`^°~{€¶¶¥{€[`✓°©π^÷|{[|=¥÷®×€[¢✓°€√¥π™I=¢{`✓¢™®^π€™{=|°©π÷¥=`•√¢÷®=✓|^¢π¥=®[®=÷€=¢^√`π€=¥=™{{|✓€°π¥=|✓€°¢π°€=¥{®=®÷×€}¢[©°®°×|{`✓¢^©÷€{`= ✓¥×®∆∆¥{`[=¢÷®÷®×€¶{`{€=®÷€×{`=®I|×`{=€=®÷™×€{`=€=®=×€}`{=©=®÷¥{{€[©®÷®×€{€[=€=®®==¥{€{€=€==`{€={¥=¥{¥{¥=¥{{¥{¥{¥{¥=¥={¥¥{=^=^[•{`¶`{÷`ו∆•∆•}¶•{^¶™¶™×™==¢×`)(#-$('?:?($)#/)*!'!'+$(!$!'+'+$!?@)'++#?*)'!!';:"!?'!';"!'?!'!'!'++_!_!'7(4!_+7+$!$("+'!_(9$82+2;+';'+'++$-2&&"67_+2!3!_(
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Dator_David
Excellent so far but updates could be faster. Though RL always comes first sigh. ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😨😵😨😵
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DRACONIAN619
I really loved the story. I hope that you can keep up giving us a great experience .please don't stop writing this story. I really love harry potter. Which means that I can't wait for these fanfic.
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siska
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This fan fic is worth your time, be open minded though because it mixed a lot of new theories and myth to create a fresh spin off in HP world. But its refreshing to read, sure theres some miss in this and that but author did a wonderfull job in patching the necessary plot hole (at least for me ( • ̀ω•́ )). Good job author, please dont drop it. Love your work.
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Mystogen
Such a good story. Love the last bit. But you just leave no stable updates... .......... .................................................. .........
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Yohanf
i like your story so much. so, please keep your story Sir author. its interesting story, the MC badass yet cool and the plot is interesting and detailed. like it so much
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Kaichen442
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Prithwish
I like the way Harry is introduced in this fanfiction. Also he is smart and clever he is not too over powered yet. I prefer if the mc is not too op at least similar or a bit more skilled will do.
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scorpioninpink
For a fan fiction, this novel can actually stand on its own. I just regret the slow updates and I hope thay the author doesn't drop it. It is a new take on HP like you have never read before so enjoy it and give the author more likes so that he/she can update more.
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DaethRavan
Fallingsword, I really love the concept of the novel ... the novel is just amazing ... im hungry for more XD ... but I would just like to ask whether you have a specific uploading time/dayz in a week where you would upload the chapter... (NOW i just want to get this 140 word thing over with dont mind this part) :p
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waffenmia
Harry won't end up with Hermione because he feels fate is doing something about it and is just ok with it. The reason I spent the stones is because of the promise of HxH. Now your telling me that it won't happen? Save your time. 8/10 ch.1-28 0/10 ch. 29- onwars
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AsuraTeam
I really like how this story is heading. I am a massive HP fan and i am eager to read more. It be great if there is a stably updates for the chapters. I have been checking every day for the next updates. Keep up the awesome work.
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MightyHeart
The novel is actually well written and decently well thought out. Pacing of the story is actually a bit fast and Harry's character progression is insanely fast like he'll probably beat Voldemort in year 3 it's that fast imo, but the author did say at some point that he didn't want to write a 500 chapter novel so that's okay I guess. One gripe I have with the novel is that the reincarnated mc basically ignores all friends and doesn't bother/want to make any connections with anyone; like he was talking about not having made connections in his past life because someone important had died or betrayed can't specifically remember. You would think that after he got a new lease on life he'd try harder to make friends and connect with people... Like these are the people who are going to fight against Voldemort and the death eaters with you, you can't take them all on by yourself. Now on to the author fallingsword. Fallingsword is a liar. He very early on in the novel sets 6 objectives for Harry, the sixth being getting Hermione as his girl and then later on basically says idgaf about her... I get it she's only 11(loli Hermione?) right now but if he never even bothers to talk to her now how is he gonna get her in the future from Ron(the jealous blyat)smh. There is also the fact that he said multiple times that he would update daily, but it's nearly been a week since last update and there is no update for the story or a status update on how everything is going; not even bothering to give us an explanation, like I get it he's doing this for free and doesn't have to give us an explanation, but he made a promise if he hadn't given us his word I wouldn't have cared about not being up to date... I would just silently wait, but he did give us his word and him not fulfilling his own promise to his readers and fans just shows how much he doesn't respect us. They should really add "Author Etiquette" as a thing you can give a rating for in original novels. I call falingsword he, I'm just assuming. Might be a she, pls no one get triggered. 😝 After note: I gave world background a 5 since its an already established world that I love.
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AsuraTeam
I love Harry Potter books, and i hope there would be a stable updates soon. If so i would rate it 5 Stars. Love your work so far, keep it up.
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Shyboy
Could you please tag the story in your synopsis? Like in fanfiction. Like H/H Greater Good Dumbledore. It would be clear cut to one read and review your story since the tags would show if you would put or not harem etc. Don't need to kill Ron but maybe something like the fanfiction of Harry Potter and the Runic Path. Where Neville was in the trio and Ron was the outcast. Again please be clear with the harem issue, Fleur Gab Daphne Luna Hermione Nymph too many good girls in HP and many of them is good material be clear with the harem prospect, I like how it's going its awesome but little know how to put harem in story and the relationship issues take too many time to the good of the greater plot.
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