Reviews of Lord Shadow by Keikokumars - Webnovel

First of all, I have to know that I'm not good at English, so I don't really like to criticize novels. But this novel is an example that I think I have to comment on. (I read up to chapter 180+) Pros - This novel has a plot. The beginning was interesting, set in a world that is turning into an apocalypse. Everyone on Earth has been given systems and weapons. The protagonist must survive the onslaught of monsters and zombies, which leaves the reader wondering how he will survive. Cons - After going through the first part of the plot, the bad part that starts with writing a narrative using The 'global second-person perspective' in which he begins to cut across the world in various characters. who do not even know the protagonist at all (not just one of the two but more than 6-7 people), I think it's a relationship plot, so I'm patient and keep reading. Later, with these scenes, the protagonist disappears but he still improves very quickly (about 100+ chapters, which this story has 1400+ chapters in total), he almost becomes a god. Humans and monsters were no longer his opponents. Loses all the aura of the survival story. However, the worst thing is The 'global second-person perspective' has never ended, but has grown. Even when the protagonist fights and the outcome of the battle is taking place. But the next chapter, the writer cut the scene to the other side of the world, making me very upset. (which doesn't happen once or twice) In addition, the cutting of the aforementioned scene was frustrating. The author also uses the concept of both parallel worlds. past-future world came into the story, which made this novel so bad that it could not be reversed The cut back and forth didn't happen just across the continent. But the author cuts the past, present, future, and all the multiverses (1 chapter per 1 world, which has no less than 7-9 chapters). During this time, the protagonist disappears without a trace. However, if something worse turned out to be my last straw, it would have been the protagonist who had originally placed his character to be smart and cautious in his every action. But after he started OP, he became arrogant and everyone had to submit to him. He will begin to use his powers to solve every problem. Plus, his EQ in love is so negative that even youngsters do better than that. [img=faceslap]

hey i really love this book so much That I am reading till the early morning just so I could read more chapters and i like the way you potrait every character and just so you know you have created a wonderful novel and thank you for that . and i like how the past azief beat every one at their own chess game but I was really shocked and found it interesting and just so you know i literally screamed when I read that chapter and just wanted to clap and salute to him for his mind thinking power and I meant it and so you know you have heart core fan over hear for this novel. and i hope for more updates. thanks you 💞 this is for you for writing such a wonderful novel .

I had high hopes for this book and felt confirmt after the first few chapters where the main character was introduce, but after that the MC just acted absolutly out of his introduced character. When he was originally only concerned about himself and thought about his family more like roommates, in the next few chapters he suddenly super concerned about his parents. Generally he is getting introduced as one thing just to be the absolute opposite in the next chapter.