Reviews of Cataclysm System (Completed) by Nefarious31 - Webnovel

I remember reading this book a few years ago when I was just getting into novels of this genre, I read through the entire book in one sitting. this book has had the ending that has left the deepest impression on me, the way the MC was used and killed off like a dog by his underlings just exceptional. I have read many books that eclipse this one in each aspect yet still none of them can beat the ending.This book is the reason why I don't care about so called bad endings. No matter how many books I read or how long of a time passes I will always remember this books title and it's legendary ending.

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bad, like I can't even describe how badly the story is written, the mc is utter trash and the author always forgets about his own mechanics. and many more

Not too bad, but can get sticky at points. I enjoyed it as a light read.

"Not a single thing had changed… This meant that the only way to increase his stats was then via circulation." Gotta say this: "F*ck You, Mr. Author" If you wanted to write a Wuxia novel you should have just written a Wuxia novel. To take a perfectly good LitRPG story and strip it of it's lootables, it's skill advancements, it's class system, it's stat dependencies and now to make it so even killing enemies serves no more purpose... What's the point anymore? I don't care about these random people, because you've already introduced dozens of "Allies" to us that we'll never see again so there's no point even learning these one's names. I don't care about the Intergalactic struggles going on behind the scenes because I have no idea how any of it works, they've only been mentioned a grand total of 5 times throughout the 95 chapters and it was vague at best. You've failed to make me care about Stanis as a Person, a Character or as the Protagonist because he started out weak and annoying and now he's just angry and annoying. He's become just another Generic Reactive MC now that all personal control has been taken away now that he's been captured by the Aliens and forced to do these pointless trials. And even before this he was just a spastic meathead running from one fight to the next, relying on Plot Armor to save him from his enemies (And friends) killing him every time he decides to take a nap in the middle of a battlefield. Most of all I no longer am able to care about the rambling, disjointed, sleep-induced-teleportation mess you call your overall narrative because of all these factors and more, due to how obvious it is that you had no ideas how the plot was going to go more then half a chapter ahead as you were writing it. I applaud your ability to keep putting out chapter after chapter of a Novel you no longer had any interest in writing with such a high quality of coherence and editing, but beyond that I'm impressed that you had so much to say with your words and so little care about how they flowed together as a whole.

This has probably the worst mc in any novel i've ever read. He's seriously borderline retarded. The only thing I've enjoyed about the book is the concept behind it, but it's just so bad

The storyline is not bad. The main character is so ***** and always falls into traps and backstabbings. This is truly a **** up story. Feels so disappointed about humans. This might be over the top but there's some truth about human nature. People doesn't like to see others doing good or living a better life than themselves. Some people might find this claim rubbish. But tap into your innerself and see how you truly feels and how other feels about you. People take reasons as country, origin, religion, believes. But everyone forget end of the day we all are human. Human nature is to find a purpose, so they make reason to go on living without thinking the harm they do overall. Im not a saint I'm the same.(This is my excuse to feeling like that) hahaha ☻☻☻ Feels so disappointed about humans.

Shitty novel don't waste your time. A retarded protagonist without a brain and a crybaby you should expend your time in better things that this piece of ****.

Warning: If you dislike mentally weak MC who loses consciousness every few chapters, not to bright and not in a comedic way and always dazes off only to have the charters next to him shake him out of it every other chapter then skip this. If none of the above bothers you then this is a solid story and you just might enjoy it.

Although the ending sucked, at least you finished the book. Great job and good luck in the future with your other novels. Hope you do another version of this novel in the future after getting better.

A potentially good story ruined by one of the worst MCs I have ever had the displeasure of reading about. The MC is a pathetic, cowardly, weak beta soyboy ***** and remains so throughout every chapter. Each chapter is literally a case of him being walked all over, beaten up and slapped around etc. Any power or skills the MC gets? Other randoms in the story already have. Every random stranger the MC meets? All stronger then him as they walk all over him while he cowers. He doesn't do anything for himself or on his own he always goes crawling back to those walking all over him for more. Asides from that, little worldbuilding doesn't help the story. Comparatively speaking, a higher level of grammar then most of the **** written here.

So... this got deleted from rrl to come here? Right... Well, the book is good and while a lot of people back on rrl hated on the ending, I found it refreshing and good because it surprised me so much.

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This novel........... Is Great, I like the background of the story, it's paced fairly well. The mc Stanis is a little rough around the edges but he can become very likeable and decent once you are able to break down the author's vision of him. I have it at 5 stars but there are some minor problems that might drop my rating(like the author forgetting things he puts in the story), although I'm looking past that because the author is fairly new at writing (he can only get better) and this story is great with alot of potential. That being said if you haven't read this great novel do so it's an amazing piece. But be patient with it as there are some minor things that might make you want to drop it, so long story short, stick with it and you won't be disappointed.

The best type of this kind of genre. I've read around and I thought I would really enjoy this genre. Better than world of demons and gods. Nice level of gore and not too much focusing on *** unlike other similar novels

Nice story Looking forward to seeing him become truly powerful(story has pace for an ideal original novel) And I have a smol wish I kinda want to him just like eradicate all other species Like he snaps fingers and poof Every other intelligent species gone Just a smol wish

For some reason I thought this was a novel abt a system that helps someone destroy the world... Welp I’ll just read this now Shudjwbdiebdgwjdhhedibrejxnethisisfor140charactersdhrhduwgduebdhehfhdjsjdhshdhh

Just three words I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pretty run of the mill system apocolypse novel it starts out with several obvious and misses out on some huge opportunitys for charicter development and despite plot armor the other doesn't hesitate to trash the mc so all and all if you like an mc who has plot armor and needs it but doesent let it go to his head(becuase its made painfully obvious that the only thing keeping our mc alive in a perilous situation is plot armor and some apropriate caution) the writing is solid enough and it is readable unlike some of the new novels on quidan but don't expect to see a bold and ruthless young master pointlessly offending his seniors

A pretty good novel. Author is cruel to his MC which is something I like though others might not enjoy it. I'm glad the MC doesn't act like an ass which is common in these types of novels and I hope that doesn't change later on.

You might want to check royalroad for more reviews. It’s a pretty good novel (although the author is pretty shameless...). Similar elements to Master Hunter K and other survival novels.

thx for the chapters :D __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Shameless review to get the ball rolling. Just give it a try. You'll enjoy it! The fights are very gory though, so just beware if you don't like those kinds of things.