Reviews of A Chromatic World by Vgnette - Webnovel

Writing Quality: 5/5. Very little to no mistakes. Flow is excellent. Updates: Don't know. New reader. Story Development: 5/5. The pacing is god. Not slow or fast. Character Design: 5/5. All he characters are distinct and interesting from the beginning. It's one of the best parts of this book. World Background 5/5. Probably the best part of the story. The descriptions are written in a way where they're short, but I can still imagine I'm there. It's like the author captures the feeling and expresses that as opposed to just saying a brown mountain is that way! I wish I was this good at world background haha. Advice for author: None. Not sure why this isn't more popular. Do you update it daily? If you do you'll probably make it on the front page and pick up some readers eventually.

Have to say, I can't find much to complain about here. The setting is interesting and quickly draws me in, and while there's a bit of info dump in chapter two, the writing flows smoothly enough that I wasn't too bothered by it. For the story itself, so far, I feel that the pacing is quite excellent and doesn't feel too rushed or slowed down. But, the thing that stands out to me most of all are the character. I simply love how distinct they are from the start with their very defined set of personalities and quirks. Out of everything, I look most forward to reading more about the characters going forward. Finally, I say to the author: Good job! I hope you keep up the good work in the future.

Hello, Fro here~~~!! At first I though the story was about war between universe, but after I read the summary again, it seems that will happen but lot later in the future chapter. I cant help but wanting to see the war immediately lol, but I guess the story has to explain the background first. Writing quality : good descriptive, and easy to read, just still have grammar mistakes, especially the tenses, you mixed the past tense and present tense in the narrative, better use one of it instead. I will not comment about stability update since I am newcomer in this story. Story development : since chapter hasnt explained from the MC's view, but from other character, story felt like hasnt begin but only just prologue I guess. Somehow I felt the first part about the father isnt important, it will not change much even you erased it. Battle mock between the arthur group as beginning is more interesting. I still didnt understand much about the world mission, but since this is still the beginning, it is alright to make thing misterious and interesting. Character design : I kept mix up between allien and anne lol, because they are similar. But you already did good job for other characters to make little quirk for a beginning story. World development : good imagination, just need more detailed description. Overall this story is great, really interesting ideas, are you gonna make the war? Im really interested about the universe war. just need more grammar correction and character fleshing, then it is great.

5 STARS FOR MEEE!!!! Hello dear readers. I'm the author for A Chromatic World, I'm giving myself 5 stars because I'm just that shameless! Anyway, this is my first attempt at writing a novel, I'm striving to improve myself and the novel. So please, if you have any feedback, criticism, or even suggestions for me please do write it, that means a lot to me. Thank you.