Chapter comments on the chapter Snap 2 of the book The Bastard In The Zombie Apocalypse

Mercy for them at least they don’t gotta suffer anymore

thx

MC Broke

Finaly no flashbacks

Why

So brutal... No offense, I have read reverend insanity, but this was really difficult to read. Btw: "He stopped talking because the dark figure suddenly appeared right in front of him" "He raised his head and saw the dark figure's eyes." Ok I just wanna give you a bit of advice here; since you already mentioned it is a black figure, there is no need to repeat it, you can just say: "The figure's dark eyes" or: "The figure's eyes", I think it enhances the readability a bit. Also, in the next sentence, when you say: "It was dead and cold.." it should be "THEY were.." because you are referring to the eyes, right? I know how difficult it is to write when it's not your native language (I'm also doing it), so keep it up. Looking forward to the next chapter!

smoga tidak ada flashback idiot lagi

Are they using dildos , cause 7 pipes is practically impossible to fit in her.