It's fascinating witnessing a protagonist's descent to madness! I do hope however, for all of Nathan's suffering, in the end he truly does become all-powerful. Dare I say, replace God him/herself?
this story is fucking bonkers. theres no sense of fucking reality in it and the last few chapters digusted the hell outta me. i know you have the potential to write with more originality
So...It's a last chapter for the moment i've started reading. I've skipped like 70% of text, coz reading about stupid problems of this emo-boy are boring. Anyway it'll be the last chapter of this novell for me and now i'll explain some reasons, but first of all i want to point - it's a fanfiction, even if some parts changed, better mention this.
1) Author tried to make system more "realistic" by changing stats, but at the same time making it more game like in other aspects. Logic?
2) Nathan are not just bastard... He is stupid, self centered, crybaby psycho (also bastard, trash and ****, but it's not the main part of him). So the name of novell are little bit off.
3) The way characters using their system are pathetic. Especially "chosen 1 system". Is there a way to make powerups more simple? Also in long time run this "chosen 1" are greatest disadvantage. Just look at Rosa's skill! Pure woman - so unlucky - have almost 0 potential in a longrun.
4) Author forgot about normal skills, no he just don't give a s**t about them... The ones he showed was soooOO unbalanced... I don't like when only MC matters and all world just flying around him.
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