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McEli_Foot
Great story so far, Sorry I was out for a bit but I haven't forgotten how great this story is. Since the first chapter till now it's been the greatest story that I've read since I've gotten on this app .I've read this and waited for this for so long that I can't not remember The Nine Heavens Demon God Yao Jun. I hope that the author completes and writes a new novel so that we can be even more entertained than we were in this one. I think we, your readers would all like for that to happen. I hope the author has good days and writes on to be even greater in the future. Like a cultivator, people, and all things... They are all to have a final rest but I hope the author can keep writing and fighting like Yao Jun to keep his readers entertained and satisfied. Thank you Author-san for not going away like all the others and I hope that you don't go away because I don't know what I would do without your stories. I like how you used your words and I've quoted some things here and there but over all you are the best. From a faithful reader I give my sincerest Thanks to you and your writing. β€œBeing deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage- Lao Tzu" A quote describing the things Yao Jun stands by and what he wants and what I hope doesn't end here. You inspire others with your words and you make other people feel better I thank you author again for writing this wonderful masterpiece.
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gaminganime
I really love your book it is simply extraordinary. It keeps me coming back for more so thanks for the good book 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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APEX_APE
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NimbleThimble
Absolutely amazing characters and setting, started off strong and here i am caught up and it’s still better than most other books on here. Definitely worth a read.
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Skepparn
I like you author but you need to learn that having a 50ch of drivel and useless mc is not ok Before around ch 48 the story was absolute trash and just skimming is good enough cause nothing of value is there at all, the only thing you could get from that is that mc is a ***** and fucking stupid yet he can endure alot That's it....
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m3gah1tss
Can someone explain the cultivation levels,author says 3 mortal earths 3 heavens 3 xiantian skies,in the chapter we see 0-10 levels then 1 grade ,i dont understand anything,author failed badly at explaining the cultivation levels in the novels.The note at the begining with cultivation levels should contain detailed explanation for reference,but in the first chapters all novels shoul;d have cultivation ranks introduced,author failed badly at it.
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Reader35
This story is also epic in scale like "Ancient Godly Monarch" so I am surprised it is so low in the rankings. Good thing for readers like me who can't buy spirit stones but I do feel bad for the talented author.
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Reader35
One of my early favorites in my library. This story has a great world view, a testament to the author's prolific imagination. The various worlds were described in substantial detail while the increase in the main character's strength and those of his cohorts was brought about gradually but in an even pace that will not bore. Some parts may be too gory and not suited for those with weak stomachs but it is what it is. I just wish that new chapters can be added at a faster pace.
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saintk
I find myself loving and hating this novel, it feels bad really bad but like when bad thing happens before the good it gets better but then turn bad again, anyways love the gate thing hate his growing strong slowly, when will his beasts evolve. And why does the enemy get to have 5 gates or will the NC kill one gate and get their ability.
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woyoung
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Reader35
I am wondering why this is not higher up in the rankings. I enjoy this as much as I enjoy Ancient Godly Monarch, both having awesome lead characters and so highly imaginative authors that conjure fantastic battles they go through. The action is so engrossing.
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Reader35
This story had a slow start and a small world view, gradually becoming more action-filled and increasingly getting bigger in scope. Kudos to the writer and translator for this exciting story.
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Skalannics
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dedicatedblob
The characters are totally unrealistic. I mean, every single one. MC saw his power used in the most sensible and correct way, decides to use it in the most silly way. Female lead hates murder and even seeing people hurt. The MC comes along, kidnaps her and forces her to kill people. She went along with the whole situation like nothing happened and even falls head over heels for him.... His parents are also uses, it would have been better if he was an orphan; seeing as they had no presence and were totally useless. Author also places dialogue wrongly; therefore the whole story flow is bad ( He would put it before a long set of actions, so the dialogue just feels out of place, while the reading what happens later is already ruined because you already created an image of what you thought happened.)
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KingOfDog
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ShEsHy
First off, I'm finally dropping this novel because this chapter ends with the second time the MC gets sucked into a spatial crack and separated from everyone. That's not to say that that's not the only bad thing about it. It has more plotholes than it has... anything else, really. The biggest one is obviously the MC. He could literally have all types of beasts (or even unlimited, dunno what the author plans to keep, the type limitation mentioned in the beginning or the unlimited version shown by the memory fragment simulation), but no, somehow a handful of strong-ish beasts is better than thousands of average ones. Then there are the knowledge gaps. At the beginning, no one knows about the human/demon deal, until they magically do. Same with the continents, no one seems to know his original continent, until they magically all do. Then there's the current big bad in an undersea castle, who can apparently divine any and all information it wants, including the location of the MC's group, but for some reason doesn't just send people to either capture or kill them. Seriously, the whole story is riddled with plotholes and sidetracking.
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Jeremee07
Totally upset with the updates for this novel I will gladly give spirit stones if there was more than 2 chapters a week. I think a chapter a day isn't to much to ask for.
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chezhawk15
Love the way the writer goes about his stuff there is no long delay in the protogonist's action as from something is to be done it has to be done. Totally love the novel and would recommend it strongly to all readers. There's only one draw back as there is no mass release .......................................................... but qaulity novels take time to create
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Jeremee07
Very enjoyable story. I just hope that there will be a clear outline of cultivation. They character build is great but the Mc I always just getting drug around against his free will its a bit frustrating and the fact that his women is always getting beat up lol
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ZoloZithro
Extremely well written and interesting concept up to chapter 48 and then it seems like it starts to take a sharp turn... I'm currently at chapter 61, I'm thinking about dropping it at this point but I'll be giving it a few more chapters a chance to see if the plot recovers.
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FlyMan
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This is one of the most addictive stories I have read so far. The only problem I have is the lack of information on when an update may occur, other than that the story is a definite must read.
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Little_Dino
I love this story! I very much recommend. The story is great. The heroine is a match for our mc in how much she works to power up. The character's abilities in this story is very creative and interesting. Of course our mc is great too. He isn't a snob where he is the savior of the world, but he isn't cold. He is also intelligent, though I hope that the heroine would sometimes learn from him more on this point sometimes. Tags: Romance, Adv, Action, Beast Companions, Tamer, Weak to Strong Oh, and no harem ~
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GatotKaca
The pace is good, writing quality & stability of updates superb. Too depressing to read. A lot of depressing scenes happened to MC. Despite all of the power up MC is still powerless in front of his real enemy. Author can't write a satisfying scene to boost morale of your reader. A little face slapping time will do :D My dao heart not strong enough to read your story, lol. Sorry to say this kind of novel is not my taste. MC powered up > beating some shrimps > beaten SO HARD by big shrimp > moving all over the place > repeat.
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hpes
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hpes

Interesting start. Much better than those random fan fiction novels that are spoiling the ratings for unique novels like this. Good grammar too. Worth a try.
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ShadowMoonDragon
Everythings good about it... Is what I'd like to say but I hate this story with every fibber of my being, the Mc could of easily escaped before he got scared for life, the author just HAD to use very VERY messed up depictions of cruelty like oh IDK maybe the 10 year old getting R###ED BY A OLD MAN AFTER HER PARENTS SOLD HER, you're sick you discust me good day.
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awakenedreamr
Excellent book so far!! A few minor mistakes that could have been caught with a spell-check, and one small inconsistancy, but otherwise Excellent!
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KiriHakai
I LIKE IT!!! This story is interesting and while MC has an amazing power that doesn't mean that everything is on easy mode. The characters are interesting and everyone so far are already important members of the story. I am still a little worried. Surely Mr. Author, you won't kill his girlfriend for the ' Berserk demon god ' trope (clichΓ©) right??? Otherwise I would rather leave it as it is and keep my good impression... Additionally...his demonic beasts are they males or females?
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EternalDrunkenSage
This is really well done////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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NimtheWriter
Great novel so read it. Ffffffffffffffffggggffffffffsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsggsgggsggsgsgsfsgsgsgsgsfgsggsgsgsggsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsfsgsgsfsfsfsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsgsg
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Fa_Daoist
Eu realmente gostei disso, estarei dando 5 estrelas para apoiar sua novela, bom trabalho_____________________________________________________
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