its a nice book for those who a looking for something new and exciting to read. even thou they aren't that many chapters yet it is a good read, it has a nice story development different from other stories that stick to the same boring ideas, while this has some really interesting elements,race,power and cultivation techniques.
Okay so now I've read 9 chapters
it may be a little early to review but ur writing quality is fine so far with really nice story development but the background needs a little enhancement otherwise
character design is absolutely great! Keep writing! ^^ x