Reviews of Starship commander trapped in a fantasy world by Gamma420 - Webnovel

Wonderfully written story with a well developed and well thought out main character. He is Ruthless when necessary without being psychotic or needlessly cruel like most ******* authors make their character, and can also be kind as well. A character with true depth.

Good start to an interesting idea, and it’s good up to about 3/4 of the story, then it goes downhill unfortunately. A genetically engineered soldier from a technological culture crashes on a magical world. Isekai scenario. He uses his advanced technology to defeat the various magic things, and the magic system gets a pretty good explanation. He then proceeds to hack the magical system, although that isnt developed as much as it could be. So far so good, but then the story progresses and I won’t spoil it for you, but the main problem is that the remaining 1/3 of the book feels rushed and ideas are not developed but instead just happen at a breakneck pace. My biggest issue though is that the ending is a real bummer, which is a logical way to end the story, but again feels rushed and doesnt do the story or character any justice. What a disappointing end to a good start.

So this gives a war hammer 40,000 type feel and I love it, a nice gritty character development, Co stars have logical development. On chap 50 but I'm engaged, and invested. Sad to see its completed at about 340 chaps, but still sharing up to be worth the read😁.

Overrated The MC does not act like a soldier at all but a stupid kid even after regaining some of his memory as soldier. No common sense. A highly ai that can deny the master request because of confidential data or priority of mission but is too stupid to withhold the mc from giving sensitive information. The mc gives information for free. For example, I am immortal but I need nanites to survive. Why would the mc told others about the nanites? So that others party has the information that the regeneration ability is due to something called nanites which the mc also told that he is lacking it? Or what about hey you have magic? How about I told you how to improve magic to be super effective for free that can even melt my ship heat shield? Not caring about advancing that empire to the point of able to conquer a world at all but also tell them oh we have a treaty that will wipeout a specie that seems dangerous. What about a more common sense treaty like withholding information from low level civilization? 20-30chapters in with all these stupid illogical sense. Furthermore, forcing women in the story. Forcing conversation that makes the mc and character in the story even more stupid.

Probably one of the only sci-fi stories that are truly good in this site. I'm can wait to see how the sequel develops. I hope the author stays true to his words and delivers it to us.

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until now chapter 47 a good book .

I gotta say this, Its perfect and the grammer stays above perfection for the entire book, Your a perfect author and dont let any one say otherwise.[img=recommend]

I read this novel until CH 48 and this is my review. Too much "F*cking" or "F*ck" words to read, I don't know who put that word, Author or someone else. As for me, read too much "bad words" become not comfortable to read and ruin a good character in the story, this what I think. Please improve writing quality and reduce "bad words" even more. This is a good story, I love the plot and I like the character, it will be perfect to reduce using "that" words.

I was pretty confused with the dialogues of some characters in this novel. This novel has full potential, if the author has someone to proofread his works and help him make the story easy to read. Also there are some aspects in the MC that is lacking, like he is a soldier but the aura he gives off in the first chapters is more like an Isekai MC which he is not. The story could have been perfect if the MC has atleast someone survived with the ship. But still it has a Unique concept 0_0

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Soooo, I think i just droped 25€ worth of Crystals on the Book and am now up to date. This Book hits a Sweetspot i didnt think i have. Fantasy/Sci-Fi with a lot of short but rich explanation of the World an its Weapons, with an awesom cast of main charakters. While some might not like the near op Protagonist, i think its well explained why he xan survive what he goes through. What might annoy the most is the sentece structure: Example: As them it annoys them. Example end. It happens more often than you think. All in all: Its an AWESOME ride and you should enjoy it! **: I cant wait for the next chapter. please faster T_T

Im currently reading this and I just love that the main character is not human but an another race with superhuman abities but I hope he will use his tech

Honestly I love the story line as it brings something fresh to these types of novels. The characters are entertaining with how they react to each other and reading it only leaves me wanting more. If you like a military style mix of magic and tech this is a good read.

I really enjoy this story. The only thing really holding it back is the spelling and grammatical errors. After a while you can generally figure out what the author is saying but it detracts from the story when every 2 minutes you are mentally correcting words.

The story is really unique and attention grabbing. It started of pretty good and from then it just spiraled down hill. The author started by switching up the MC persona to some Isekai BSed that was really throwing me off considering our MC is a harden soldier was in charge of annihilating planets 🪐 and solar systems. It just didn’t fit...the image. Overkill of information that was really unnecessary to the story. EVERY female in this story is just a copy and paste like they are either meek or a loud mouth that just add on to the fillers. Story had a great potential and the author simply failed in the delivery. If you can stomach the typical tropes , isekai , female lead you’ll soon forget the name of in need of saving then by all means go for it!

The novel was very good back when the good is that a good luck Heather while I was writing a good story Halle. It was very in the martial arts stuff. Is it a good try to kill people saying Bang?

I don't like it. Firstly he doesn't act like a hardened soldier, he acts like typical isekei mc who helps people and behaves un-realistically for a soldier. I mean he is a being engineered for WAR!! but then he meets 2 random locals fights them, then heals them and then jokes around with them. He compromised his position like that and then offers the local technology and other help just like that. It would make more sense for him firstly to observe how the world works (incognito!!) before interacting like that and making promises. Moreover, if he has a huge technological advantage he doesn't need compromise with weaklings again he is an engineered sci-fi (supersoldier). You should not made the mc as a soilder but maybe as a diplomat or somthing then I would understand,

This could be such a good novel if it wasn’t filled with unnecessary info-dumps, there are so many details that nobody cares about! In this novel there is an interesting story and the author knows what he he writing about and on Webnovel this is quite rare, but the story is so filled with info-dumps that it becomes too slow and boring. It should be entirely rewritten and all the chapters should have at least half the length, and the story would be still slow. All of this without considering the bad grammar that makes the reading process even more exhausting.

Placeholder review -- I am writing after reading 100 chapters but I just cannot stand the character development. Author needs an editor and proofreader, but that is commonplace and not a big issue, what I care about is getting to know the author's idea, which is very well planned out in the world-building, plot-development, and story-pacing aspects. The exception is the character design, which I am uncomfortable with, at least up to the chapter 100-milestone, my opinion may change when I pick up this story again. My compliments to the author though, for keeping me interested to the rest of his story even though I completely hated his protagonists.

My opinion based my current progress (ch 36). Story has really good potential. Characters seem interesting, the same can be said about world setting. Unfortunately there is one huge minus to this story - number of mistakes in chapters is really high. It's understandable to make them but so far it looks like chapters are not checked even oncebefore publication.

This book really need the light. It has good storyline. reasonable plot and character thinking level. the world building is also very good. Hope AUTHOR does not drop it..

This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book it’s really good and please write a sequel to this book

50 chapter and I am loving it. great character building. I like how people simply think and not some deep **** that can be thought up in a second. I like the way the MC is op and still not some duce-bag. killing around people and no immediate romance, but like the way of flirting. A great recommendation to anyone searching science vs magic theme with great storyline.

These chapters keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book it’s really good and maybe a sequel

This chapter keeps getting better and better I can’t wait tell the next chapters come out so please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it and please keep writing this book it’s really good

OK - first let me start by saying that I love sci-fi novels (and that I think this novel is a gem, and deserves more credit than it's getting). I also happen to love fantasy novels. But what I really, really love are novels that manage to blend these two genres together creating an entertaining, well-written, action-packed, science <3's magic, totally amazing story. And that, my friends, is exactly what this author puts out. The characters are interesting, little to no grammatical errors, not to mention a sometimes hilarious, sometimes action/gritty, holistically amusing story-line! And as a bonus feature, the author seems to have a background in science and combat?? Regardless, the author sprinkles cool sounding combat and science-techno jargon throughout the story; while I'm not sure any of it's correct, it sounds frickin' awesome. Keep the good work, dear author, and I'll keep reading!