Reviews of Selfish Battle by MishalZamir - Webnovel

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I love dis book Plz ohh where is the remaining part ,I can't wait to read it is very interesting author plz keep it up When are we getting the next update nxt Am really curious

I hate when woman always let her emotion and use the term live to justify her receptiveness of being emotionally abused. People live not just because of love

Not bad of a story am enjoying it but the chapters are quiet short hope they can be a little longer and if only we could the updates even more or maybe constantly the update is taking a long time to be uploaded

I love your book a lot Am anticipation for more Iove the progress being made in the story I love the way u used the names and gender Each character are worth praises

The Novel is nice to follow but again confusing ..firstly You Involved Too Much Vulgar(Bad Language).And It was flowing smoothly But Afterwards The Accident And Memory Loss Of Valz The Tone Has Completely Changed its Neither Passive Nor Active Speech. And Its Very Hard To Connect The Chapters

I love this novel this is one of the best story have ever read but it shouldn't end here wish it had a part can't wait for it return 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

The story is really great so far. There are a lot of twists and drama which leaves me wanting more. At this point in the story, anything could happen. The possibilities are endless and I can’t wait to read how the story unfolds. Great work so far Author ❤️😘

i was such a fan of this particular novel i even recommended it to my friend but i have lost the track of the chapter, but u don't mind reading it again

It's a nice book though there's alot of cursing and some bits of confusion but all in all its interesting.am waiting for the updates from the author

The synopsis is eye catching but then I checked when was last updated and it's been 2 months. It's heart wrenching waiting for updates that doesn't come.

I like your work... You do work hard for this.. In spite of being a student.. Your taking out time for this... Would like to read more... But the most best part is thar you communicate very well.. At least you tell us that you would be posting it late... That's the coolest part..!!! Thanx... ❤

The story is quite interesting. It is nevertheless a good one to a romance genre. It was a great time reading this. And I'm happy the author will continue updating.I like Mariza as a loving character and also the coldness of Valz. The flirting characters are quite good in flirting. Best novel ever.

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It's a very good story written in female lead prospective I just love the fact how she emerged as a strong character from being a silly lovestruck girl and how she survived after all wrong happened with her i would recommend to read this novel at least once

It was very interesting and I think all the books u make will get very good and better than this .I also Can't wait to read another one of your story's

I like the premise of the story even though the ML and FL kept annoying me with their attitude. I understood that Valz has his own issues but it's not a good idea to playing push and pull with Mariza when he has a hint that she liked it. It wasn't fair for Mariza. And Mariza seemed kind of a pushover. But I'm hoping for her character development as you've stated after Valz got amnesia ;) make her fiesty so she could shut all the witches up! Your have good vocabulary but your sentence structure could be improved. Besides clearly identified each conversation in a paragraph instead of combining them with long sentences, I hope you'd mind to split the long sentences into a short ones. You could use connect the sentences by using commas or conjunctions but three to four sentences in a one would make the some readers helpless. I hope you'd take my words into consideratin. I hope this story going to be better and popular ;)

Good story with potential. Too short of sentences. No clear motivations behind why they fell in love. No clear use of conjunctions during CHAP 1. Please use a greater variety of vocabulary. More world-building. More chaps.

Love the humor in this story and the character exchanges, it feels very realistic and like real friends! But the issue in this story is that there a few grammar errors, even in the summary. For example, the need of grammars in some of the dialogue, and no spaces before a comma :) But aside from that, pretty interesting story~

Author knows how to describe things and has a rich vocabulary. In first 6 chapters, I caught only a few missing words and even less grammatical mistakes. Story development is good so far. My only problem was the names. Almost all of them are hard in pronunciation. Keep up the good work, you'll reap the benefits eventually.

I'm only at chapter two and will probably update this later so be warned. Honestly, all this story needs is a good editor. All of the bad things are things that could be solved with a good editor and a bit of extra time. Things it needs: -Spell check -A bit more background info on the characters that is put in a smooth way. the things that lead up to the info dump has to do just that-lead up to it. You can't just come out of the blue and start talking about it. -Refine the flow of the story, it is a bit choppy. Other than that good job

Very inconsistent with the names at the start. Who the eff is Joecasp? Or is it Caspjoe? I don't know. Severely underusing the comma. There are many parts where a comma is needed, but there isn't one. Capitalization. See, if you capitalize the given name, you capitalize the surname as well. In the sypnosis, the "risket" confused me. What is a "risket"? Turns out it was a surname. Characterization. From the start you describe Mariza as cute and meek. Suddenly she says, "I have been nothing but nice to you!" That's completely out of character. Using double apostrophe instead of a quotation mark. Just why? Walls of text. It is as easy as 1-2-3 to add spaces between paragraphs. The walls of text look unbearable to read. And lastly, my main problem. Point of view. You need to stick to one - it's either first, second, or third. The sudden change in POV jarred me inside. That's just my silly criticism. At the end of the day, I'm probably not much better than you. Also, I like the story so keep to it.