This is one of the better written reincarnation based stories. The main character is intelligent and crafty. Then again thereβs lots of alchemy involved and I always love stories that involve crafting. With other planes, a pending world disaster, and lots of ridiculous ego and face slapping, the story moves along at a good clip. Enjoy the read! I know I am!
Phenomenal book, great description of each character and development, great description of each environment and world building and good solid storyline
the novel is a bit generic but it isn't boring the main problem is that the novel is incomplete .
at the end of the novel the mc defeat the boss of that ark and in the next chapter there is an epilogue that dont make any sense and more that 70% of the plot are never explain correctly
when mafa Marlin comes after finishing planer war and comes to the mafa farming family and gifts younger generation according to their requirement this happens in which chapter.
so, after many times this book appear on my free daily read, I could finished this novel at long last. the content was good at start, bored in the middle, and fast forward ending.
Incredible story a Gem Star for sure. Explainable overpowered omniscient genius cold blooded MC. I love how the story goes from a simple reincarnated youth, being reincarnated again this time to the past of the destroyed world he reincarnated into. A villain who'll do everything to survive the upcoming apocalypse, at the same time saving the world itself. Good novel sure is, it's just that it lack the fun and joyous nature there isn't even a romantic development. π
The amount of face-slapping in this novel is astonishing. Everything is fine, but there has to be someone seeking trouble every time he steps somewhere
Gotta give this another review because I just finished the ending of the book. Just gonna say I would rather swallow a box of nails than read this book again. The ending was the worst I've ever seen in my life and I pray to God that the author never writes a book ever again.
This book had so much potential, but it was ruined by the author incorporating face-slapping and a ton of filler. I'm sorry, but I would rather watch the filler in Bleach than read this book again. It had so much potential for a great book, but the effort in actually making it that way was lacking. It has great story elements that could have made the book amazing, but the author wrote little to no character development and it just feels stagnate. I don't mind world building books, but why is that the main focus over the last few chapters? I feel like I'm reading a book where the author couldn't decide on what type of book he wanted to write the whole time. I would not recommend reading this book. The story is very involving and it has a ton of potential, but you will be very quickly disappointed with how the author writes it.
A good story. The ending was clearly rushed and incomplete, but at least we got some idea of how it's supposed to end. The chapters about the Gilded Rose were the most interesting.
Hard to read, repetitive is an under statement as is the unnecessary filler. Then you get that horrible ending.
Glad I didnβt spend coins after the 1st hundred chapters.
umm it would be great if there is second book about it and it start from solving crisis of undead levitation plane π³...
I hope we can have book 2 soon .. and finish the book in more details [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
There's too much "Only Lin Yun" and "Fortunately"
I'm considering this novel kinda good, the story is okay and character development is kinda good but the plot hole and plot armor is too much for me to take
Like i said, there's too much "Only Lin Yun bla bla bla" and "Fortunately"
I hate to give this novel such a bad rating. But after following the novel for well over a year spending tokens and time to read. The ending is absolutely terrible. It's as if they just forgot what they wrote about and stamped THE END HAPPILY EVER AFTER on it. Such a shame
literally the worst book I've read on here. it really hurts me to drop a book, so I kept at it. The end was rushed into a single chapter. Don't waste your time
I found this story through recommendation and reading the summary I thought it would be a good novel but it kinda got boring just from the earlier chapters. Might try reading it again but idk because its a lot of mono and info dump. The characters are not that interesting either. Again, might come read this again later bcus I really like the concept but for now its mid :/
i would say it stares great, but the plot until the end was the same. an arrogant stupid villain which always underestimate the mc. i actually put alot to it since i dont want to drop a story once i've started it. ooh the disappointment with the ending. the rushed and incomplete ending is the worst
Hoped to get a good novel but got another overrated, continuous face-slapping, and repeat of same plot multiple time all over. Dropping after 400 chapters.
loveddddd itttttt wish for more tho .like only got to 40 or so years he can live for 10k or more Soo I think u should have made and out 10 for 1k years each so that we can have a nice picture but it's fine I loved it I am sad it's over too make a second book soon kk
The story was good at the beginning, and it did an amazing job at setting the bases for it to be developed, but then, the story just stops. The end is as abrupt as it can be. It kinda feels like the autor just got bored with it and didn't want to know anything else related to it.
I wouldn't recommend reading it. Don't get me wrong, the writing quality is not that bad, but when you get to the end you can't help but feel that bad aftertaste.
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Having read the whole story, my only true complaint is the few paragraphs at the end in which the story's end is summarized, its almost like the author ran out of ideas and chose to wrap up the story. Which was truly disappointing when there were so many things that were left unsolved/finished.
Honestly the story could be double the current length and still have more to cover the world building is amazing, while the character development is a bit lacking and it would have been nice to see a bit more diversity in the characters.
Worst book on here!
Everything is repeated with paraphrasing in every chapter to hit the word count.
No character developpment or growth.
Terriblee conclusion too!
A Review after reading the whole story.
Many people say that the main character is too OP, sure that is true for that time, but do you see the main goal of the character? He is trying to prevent the equivalent of an apocalypse and since he is from the future, of course he looks OP compared to them. If you read the whole story, you'll understand that everything is connected and it's not random, so the story development is really good.
For the people complaining that there is no female MC, THERE IS AN APOCAPLYSE. That is his main goal, not going back in time to play around. Like if the world is ending, would you bother with romance. If you have an issue, don't read it. Just don't diss the author. If you want romance, there are literal thousands of others just on this website so go to them. Although the ending is rushed, it still makes sense.
If you only read the start, it may seem that the MC is overpowered but he is really not. Facing the real powerhouses, he has to think and plan a lot instead of just overpowering them. The world building is very good and there's always a sense of mystery about the history of the past eras which make it much more interesting.
Before judging the novel, why not read the whole story as it will not make sense unless you do. So don't write random reviews just to satisfy the daily challenges.
Justynchinn