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if you like stories about the kingdom, this is a good novel for you to read, add to the library and enjoy reading building a kingdom..
if you like stories about the kingdom, this is a good novel for you to read, add to the library and enjoy reading building a kingdom
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An awesome story. Definitely a hidden gem. Wring quality is really good. The plot, world and characters are unique.
The comedy is refreshing and not so typical.
Overall awesome story so far. I am just compelled to write a review as this story needs to reach a lot more readers.
The story is extremely well written and is very fluid. It feels proper and flows well. The world is well thought out, and the characters feel like real people. The story itself is a concept I find to be completely unique, and it is a real gem.
But.
While the writing is good and the story is good, the way it starts is really bad. It just throws you in and inserts you in to the mc's life, or technically his death, you don't even know who he is, what he did in the past or why is he the mc, and not some other John Doe. Maybe if there was more prologue to the start of the story it would be a complete 5 star story.
Now. That said. I'm not sure if I like the story or not. Like I said before it is well written, but I didn't 'know' the mc until somewhere around chapter 40. But all things considered I will continue to read, and despite that one major flaw I have no complaints, so I suggest that others read it as well.
I have no idea why this story doesn't have many reviews ... This is a hidden gem ... I like the world building ... The characters are well fleshed out ... The MC is not an egomaniac or an idiot who likes to slaughter people ... No random villains waiting to be killed by the MC ... Also this is a very different kingdom building novel ... I hope the author will put on a nice cover art(???) soon ... Ppl do give this novel a read and don't ignore it due to the blank cover art.
A humorous, light romp about a boy who gets a second chance in life. This time, he decides to make something of his life by going to the frontier. A place of danger and opportunity.
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