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AlreadyBeenTaken
It's amazing how the story could literally go any direction and keep the reader anticipating what happens next. Nearly a chapter release every single day shows that the writer has the passion for it!
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AskIfILikeLemons
This is some quality writing right here. Each chapter is pretty long. Depictions of the beasts are well made and links to images are supplemented, giving a more concrete image of the world. Good stuff dude, gotta give props.
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shinigami8671
65 chapters in, I think I can proudly say that you won't be disappointed by this. I waited almost 2 months to give a review because I wanted to be sure this was something I wanted to see till the end. I have paid a lot of attention to the world and the people inside it, there is something for everyone. And I do have to point out that you will see some names that you might recognize, these are from some manga's, anime or even novels. but that's about it. I only used the names of characters that I have liked over the years so this is my way to let them live on, but make no mistake, these are JUST namesakes and have no connection with their counterparts.
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NirvanaPenguin
Author created his own webpage were you can read the novel for free. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . jijjkkkkjekehekwhdievdmfjd
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Muthair_Ojewole
Nice and fast paced story telling . Character with interesting personality and development. Nice twist with the inclusion of technology in a cultivation story
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SorcererCat
This is a great novel with an interesting story line! It had quite a twist to it when we found out about who he could trust and who he couldn't. And we can't forget about the fact that the MC has pets that are useful!! I just wish there were more chapters to read :-)
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mr_popo
Writing quality: Gave it a 5 star since i couldn't find anything that bothered me. Updates: Nothing too much to note, stable i suppose? Development: I'm not sure, the MC his goal seems to live a happy life with loved ones but the further i read the less that seemed to be the case. At some point i dind't even know what his goals were anymore except becoming strong. Character: Lowest of the scores i gave. He's like the mc of ATG... i think it was that? Guy who murders entire kingdoms for looking at him wrong. The mc of this story seems to going the same path even tho he's supposedly to be ''good'' (read the story and you know that he's supposedly the good one and not the bad one) Either way, i don't see him as good and neither does he. Maybe the bad would just be massacring for the heck of it? Anyway i see him as neutral but... neutral exists. Background: Pretty solid overall Conclusion: Read it, it's a good novel. Just not for me or some other people tired of the neutral evil mc. Of course all this might change in the future chapters or the world is that vile that he seems like a good guy but i'm not interested to find out anymore.
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Gantja
Keep it up ................................................................................................................................................................................................
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wuttt2
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Lycidaes
I really love this novel. Even though he sometimes forgets about a few things he mentioned in the story but overall a really great free story
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zeks101
I would really like to know why the chapters are not coming out regularly The world design is awesome I'm imagining it in computer graphics like an animated movie
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Tharranvir_Singh
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APEX_APE
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hersheytemple
Have read over 200 chapters as of this review and I've got to say, one of the best novels on this platform to date. I'd say it's on par with number one dungeon supplier, cultivation chat group, and release that witch. Well thought out world with characters that u can sympathize with and want to root for at times. There are times when mc is a hypocrite and makes some questionable decisions but overall great story. Mc has some funny and amusing moments with other characters at times. My one and only wish is that it would make the story better if the character went through more internal battles/struggles on a moral standpoint more than he has now cuz up to this point he has done some questionable actions that aren't up to par as the "good guy" that's he is supposed to be, right now he's more middle of the road maybe chaotic neutral or evil neutral alignment as of now which does make for a kind of interesting story so far I guess. Overall great story and would recommend
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Rashka
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A hidden gem!! I am enjoying Reading each chapter SO MUCH!! Different style in writing but strangely you really remind me of the great Er Gen or I Eat Tomatoes sir. I thank the God the moment you decide to writing a novel. What a blessing for this world!!!
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_YuRen
This thing is so awesome! By the way i kinda wondering why cant i see the "send gift" button? I want to send gift but just cant... Sorry for using this review for asking questionπŸ˜…. To author, thank you for being born, and keep up the good work! To readers, kindly vote this story if you love, like or interested in it. Also, stay being a supportive reader!! But! man... i want this to have its own manga...way to anime😍😍. Its just so awesome! And i cant help itπŸ˜„.
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I really like this novel and i may add that this novel is like nothing you find around here,not that i encounter it.I am more amazed that this novel isn't so much known...wierd,wierd
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mexin007
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Beef_Witted
Truly deserves a much higher rating found this near randomly reading a comment on another novel. Slow pace as far as LN's are concerned but that is a plus in this case. The story telling, development, and pervasive attitude that the world doesnt revolve around the mc make this novel unique. From a world of cultivation written in a way where cultivation is almost secondary compared to the journey itself, side character and world development is on a tier of it's own second to none. Some side characters in this only appear for a few chapters yet I care more for them than some of the mc's in other novels. Great Great Great novel need many more like it.
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mexin007
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I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!! GIVE ME MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE ASDICNQDCIQERICQEORCIERVCOERNCOQN. Overall I found that the characters actually are enjoyable to read and arent just reacting to whatever the mc does.
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Drifting_Clouds
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Conqueror1
Honestly this might be my top novel here, everything is good, but sadly i hate reading 1 by 1 in this novel because its too good. I always wait for 50 chapter then binge read it, anyways thank u so much author for writing suck an awesome novel
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Writing and grammar is fine. But the author is intentionally making the mc dumb as a pig. Example : He had a manual he gets when he first goes to the beast world. He had that manual for about a month or two. Like it was the only thing the mc could use to get stronger, and the mc was all about getting stronger. But then at chapter 11 after a tragedy happens, mc goes somewhere to train and opens the manual for the FIRST FUCKING TIME. Like literally, he gets 'taken aback' by the mention of information information in that manual. Like, wow. I hate these kind of things, there for the sake of the plot to progress the mc has to INTENTIONALLY make mistakes, then the mc blames the gods/heavens etcetc for not saving people. He doesn't even try to get better till reality slapped him on the face, and the author dares to make the mc curse the heavens. I will read till chapter 100 and updated the review.
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Ricardo_Miloos
This novel is quite good. The author has a right mentality for making good stories with actual and realistic story progression. By there is one problem, the start is quite slow for a apocalypse novel, more or less too slow for some of the readers liking, but overall, has nice writing and stuff, I give 4 and a half stars bud.
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SnowLeopard
Good writing with few to no mistakes. The story moves at a pace to guide the reader through his journey in the "new world." Beasts and battles along with characters are described well. Also unique naming like the Sixth. It progresses at the leisure of the characters rather than the readers' need to see action which is good in probably an uncommon way of most stories. Nice job, fun read.
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G_SoulKing
Writing quality 4.5/5 World background 4/5 But the character development is not realistic. I simply can't understand the author's thinking. I get it, he doesn't have a great childhood. But his mother doesn't abandoned him willingly. Her family forced her, and even still she tried to make up to him. She is always nice to him and helps him every time but he doesn't have and love for his mother. Then suddenly the world ends and he was invited to another family. And in a few days he fell so much in love with that family that he is ready to do anything to protect them. This is not how human beings work.... At least let him show some resistance at the beginning. And i don't like how he is treating someone else sister as his whole world in a few days. And the reason is because she is cute....seriously...it doesn't make sense. Anyway your writingstyle is good, I like it. It would be good if you make the beginning better because that is what attracts the readers. I was expecting a cold MC at the beginning who begins to warm up as the story goes on according to your description of him at the beginning
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I think that this is a pretty great novel, and the many different worlds/planes have a lot of potential for future plot. Really looking forward to the future plot.
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