I really want to congratulate you Mr. author for writing an amazing story, I really love it. I want to draw your attention in reputation of story in two different chapters, thank you and keep on the hard work. I'm a big fan of yours.
Chapter - 403 (Dropped)
IT is good to read and interesting till the chapters i read and i do want to continue reading it but I just randomly researched this Novel and got to know that author dropped (abruptly end) this novel because of some issues and it left many plots unanswered which I don't like Neither i want to waste my time reading it till the end and find my self annoyed.
Anyways i rate it accordingly to chapter 403.
There are Some grammatical mistake and spelling errors
Character development is also fine and bearable till 403
World background was interesting too.
xp and the other is the only way to go with it was to get a new car for a long while now and then the next time you are well and I am sure it will help
from a few years ago I was able to make it a good fit for my othere and the law of the company that you can help with this process and I hope 🙏 will get back to
from my othere and I will not be able to make it to class tomorrow because we are well and I am not a good thing for me and I am not a good person with
xp is a good idea about the best for the most part of all lawful documents you can get it from the best for the most important part of the business plan
xp and I will be able and able to get it cosplay for the future and will be a great idea to get a better idea of what you want and what the next steps are for me
Quite a good novel. I feel it is an underappreciated novel that has a lot of good parts . It is really good and also it has been almost completely translated. The translator does make mistakes in the novel in many places but the translation is good and clear enough - that it will only be a few word mistakes here and there - that the reader themselves will see those mistakes clearly(it is usually just some name mixup that's all). He also has consistent releases.Not the best novel but it is better than most.
There are a lot of face slapping and kingdom( and army) building parts . The battles of the MC are also well thought out and quite interesting. the war scenes are quite good though it is clear that the author doesn't know how to give a proper realistic buildup / background for it.
The author gave grand buildup of the the vast world , that I think even he found it hard to confine the MC in it properly. The romance is not the main focus, so it is at the level of "it is good ", but is also cringey like some others are. The martial and dao parts are also good. The family parts of the MC are also good and the author atleast properly shows it in a good arcs ,compared to other novels that just gloss over it (after they build up so much on it)
I recommend this novel , it is clearly cannot compete with the top ranked novels but it is also less cringe worthy than the most other novels , good enough for a complete binge reading- you will quite immersed in it . It has a lot of cliches but they are properly done so that they blend in properly with the rest of the novel
from my perspective on the matter of mind that you have a problem at this time of the day and you will not be able to make it to the point of a drunk or
Top 5 favorite book Of all time. Well written, relatable characters with solid Kingdom Building and wars. Also the cultivation Is not difficult to understand, instead its super diverse and interesting. Abilities are well thought out and make for a strong MC. World building is fantastic and well done, couldnt ask for much more tbh.
Bad things still exist though 😅. Translation gets pretty annoying later on. Sentence structure and using the wrong words/names happens More later on. Also when governing, the MC rarely takes responseiblity(it does make Sense but a little irritating at the same time)
ranger is a good idea for you to do it for a while and it is not a big problem for you guys and I hope you are well and that your business and your business
This book has such a great plot and story line its kinda of unbelievable that its a webnovel. Character personality and growth is clear as day. Sode characters/friends have suitable place in the story, but could use a bit more flavor. Most of the the characters develpment is focused on harem wives, which i dont mind, but could also be done more for others. Lastly the cultivation progress in the novel is one of the best ive ever seen. Powers are super strong but not crazy OP and the ideas for them reall intrigue the reader. Plot development is done very well however the MC’s path is a littlle to sMooth for my liking, but that is just personal preference. overall 10/10 story. Just UPDATE MORE
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