What happens to all the chapters?
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I could understand why someone spaming this novel. Make funy mc or funy system choose one. Trying to make both idiot. Than you are screw.
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Just write this because I love how the story is so far do me the system is useless in my option but keep if you want it your story and have a happy new year
Great! Not gonna talk about quite and just say it's not bad and I have to mention that the story of the rebellion is really great making me wanna see more. I can't wait for volume 2.
The story development is kinda fast suitable for the book itself, one of the reasons I enjoy it. Again, hope to see more.
Keep Going 🙏! I love it.
Not to bad overall since its a rough writing with no edit, could be better, again another reason I like it is that it's rough and wild. Though the rating and super high I can say I love it.
Good story flows pretty smoothly. Like how the system hinders the MC. Background of the world and characters can be improved upon. The fact that the author is not heed to write this or updated or edit this I find mind-boggling because the story is actually turned out really well and I really commend the author for that.
I really enjoy this story. It is nice to read and I like an author that talks with the readers. I enjoy the first person view on this story. Btw this story deserves more credit.
Why not give it some more love to combat the haters. I really do hate that I have to type 140 characters for the review but it makes sense even though some people still give dumb reviews and hate on the story.
I love how you are able to keep a bit of the plot when you made side stories. I believe that you should keep the system but when he starts to kill and meet up with people or is lonely he pays more attention to it and himself and how he changes his views. Otherwise wise I can’t wait for the next brilliant story your mind thinks of. Your fan Landon
I really enjoyed the story and am looking forward to the 2nd volume.
The author doesn't spend a lot of time describing the world cultivation system or the implications of each increase in rank which I actually like.
The story moves forward quite rapidly which keeps it interesting and me looking forward to what happens next.
Pretty solid 4 stars sure some sentences could be phrased better but overall pretty solid. It does the whole Isekai stuff with out Mc being overly OP nor does Mc just go around flirting with every chick cause you know he's the all good all handsome mc.
Very unique and interesting start of the story. Description of the story is quite good at the start. Best wishes for the author to progress well in the story. And also take care of your health sir/madam Author. 🙇 Merry Christmas !
It's good so get your ass to chap 1 and read it.
I feel like I didn't stress this enough "it's good". Tha k you. Now go read it. Fr this time.
Just so you know. IT'S GOOD!
OK, I swear I'll leave this time.
Did you know that this novel was originally at 4.9*? Apparently someone is deliberately rating this novel low due to a personal grudge so don't listen to the bad reviews. Just read it! IT'S GOOD!!!!!! *poof*
I can confidently say that this novel is easily one of the best original novels with a system. MC does not rely on the system for every **** that comes his way, author uses foreshadowing, and the writing is good(has some flaws but cut the lad some slack!) Honestly your loss if you don't read. His character has the best development and not many authors bother with this so stop sleeping on this novel and quickly read it!
Might be boring at first but jus' wait, it gets intense~
I added this story on a whim and opened it by accident. The story is above average. It has some rough spots, but is overall a nice read. The author splits most of his chapters into two, so even though there are 180-ish wn chapters, it is approx 100 actual chapters of content.
Cultivation is semi-thought out and has a mix of modern-world knowledge that let's the mc excel after a certain point.
The characters are likable and relatable. Some actions feel forced, but they are a minority.
I look forward to volume 2!
volume one has finished.
it is good. not perfect, but good enough for a web novel that is free.
better than most originals that get dropped. at least this one is done.
read it!!!!!!
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Essa é uma boa novel, claro que não é essas que tem MC's OP logo no inicio, mas ela tem um bom ritimo as postagens estão em dia, o mc esta se desenvolvendo psicologicamente e tendo aumento de força num ritimo estável...entao a unica coisa q posso dizer é pra que leiam e analisem vocês mesmos, já que ninguem entende as propris preferências melhor que nós mesmos...e ignorem essas reviews de 1 ou 2 estrelas que são apenas pessoas sem nada para fazer \_('- ')_/
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Author tries his hardest to keep the story moving along while keeping in the fluff to make sure it doesn't move too quickly. I really enjoy the idea behind this story. Author also has a weird writing style that only makes the story better. Basically what I'm saying is Nice work author.
MC is reincarnated person but just from ordinary one not ex-soldier, ex-assassin, etc and ignorant of the world even in early reincarnated live. MC also given System but System is not OP and most the time used for comedy purpose. The Focus here is how MC that Ignorant Naive Boy grow to become Man of Leadership.
Have to ask the author for forgiveness, found the novel first at another place and fell in love with it, so I made this account to support him, the novel has a great potential and the character development is quite realistic albeit not much, the worldbuilding is a little bit lacking in my opinion, but since that is only available through the knowledge of the MC it is also aceptable, though if he really is going to be a power later on it needs to be expanded. Overall it is very good and has potential to be even better, keep doing the great job you're doing!
Love from Brazil!
good novel written but unfortunately written by someone that hate milk! do you know that milk is good for your bone and skin? You should drink milk more so you write more chapter! LOL
Though not the best compared to much more bestsellers but still really great and compared to the trash we have right now and keep having try it cause the current **** we get is for ped** and lonely people mast******** to it so just trust me 🙏 don't go down that dark hole
author here, giving my novel a biased review.
this novel has many readers. just like everything out there, there is no way i can please everyone.
this novel is a little slow, and different from all the other xianxia you have read. the MC is not a genius, but just another ordinary person.
if you want to read about how an ordinary person, who is like you and me will struggle on his path, then you will enjoy this novel. this is an origin book and book 1 of the rebel series.
Boring anti mc story with a useless system that's only meaning is to go against the mc,. Plus the levels of cultivation are unexplained and the energy supposedly can't have a number because everyone has different amounts so from what I gather the author got lazy and didn't want to add energy amount and skill drain.
Things may be a bit out of point to my point of view. But as a writer I know that more you write, the more chance that you will go out of point, it is hard to stay focus on your main story , Keep it up
People may say the title can be editing into the wishing system or the wishing fulfilling system as MC are forced to fulfill other wishes, We have not see the Rebel part, and people are getting a bit impatient on that
Ikrus