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4.02

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SOMBRIO
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Crystalline_Blue
It is an awesome fan fic . It is worth reading . The plot is interesting . I really like the MC's personality . It is amazing how the story remains the same as the original while still being different .
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_Kuro_Neko_
This story is for people who love that the main character is so over powered literally nothing in the universe can stop him. I don’t know if you like that kind of novel, but if you’re like: “I’m ok with some op moments but not the entire time” then this is not for you!
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UnknownToAll
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DisloyalEye
The history is fun .you won’t regret read this Overpowered Mc Good writing Naruto fanfic It’s a good novel in overall 140characterssssssss
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lxylf
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lxylf

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JManM
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JManM

I didn't read too far into the story, but from the chapter titles ahead of where I left off there was little likelyhood of the situation changing from the boring state it was in. The MC is infinitely powerful and completely apathetic about what is going on. If he doesn't care why would the audience?
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Godlyghostwatcher
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FruitlessEndeavour
Honestly, it's one of my most favourite naruto fan fiction. Although I'm only a level 1, I still think I can state my opinion. Although the characters could be developed abit more as personally I would have liked to see a bit more romance. I'm probably being quite biased since I love OP characters :) Thank you author for the read ;)
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BlueBee
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BlueBee

Okay this is going to be rather long but first of all: This story is awesome thank you for writing it Void-san <3 I really loved the concept of the third Otsutsuki brother, it was something new and interesting and it even included a semi-reincarnation that i have a total craze for :)) the writing is superb and although there were some typos here and there, it didn't disturb the flow of the story or confuse me. The updates were plenty, mostly one or two chapters a day and i was always excited for the next chappie when the dreaded cliffhangers showed up but was never disapointed! xD The plot holes were very few which was awesome tbh! The world background and 'history' of the story was very structured and made the story very balanced overall. Though there were some loose ends to the story like the underground empire he build, the abysal pheonix or even the part in which Minato wanted to confront him about his powers and if there was somthing bothering him. But don't get me wrong the story itself was/is awesome! As for the characters themselves in story: they were well developed each and everyone had their clear role to fulfill and their development/improvement was steady and logical. Although the MC Ryu Otsutsuki/ Uzumaki Namikaze was really a plus thousand year old God Void-san made him into an awkwarrdly lovable character and it was really amusing to read the way our MC interacted with the other characters around him, such as his Team and his Family, although sparse it showed the love they shared and they influenced him. Last but not least, i want to thank all my lucky stars that this was NOT a harem, sorry to all the harem lovers out there, but i was THRILLED to know that and loved the story a hundred times more after finding that out. Especially with the way his love story with cute Fuu was portrait! It made you completely forget that this guy an old wise god but cute little boy experiencing the world of love for the first time! CUTE!!! All in all, although the ending was rushed and unexpected i have to say that this is one of the best fan-fiction stories out there! i really this story as a whole and would recommend it to anyone!! <3 <3
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Lovelynovels
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WhiteGhost
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wanderer_of_novels
this story is absolute garbage. the authour can't write for ****. there's zero character or story development. that world building is non existent,
5yr
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_EMI_
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_EMI_

Other than the fact that M.C is a bit too overpowered, everything else about this novel is perfect. Keep up the good work. I think that it would be interesting if M.C travel to other worlds like seven deadly sins or some cultivation world so that M.C would at least face some challenges. Something like god of slaughter or heck.. even great demon king. I shall seal the heaven would be nice as well.
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TheTrollMaster
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5yr
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hellenator
Really liking the story so far, I think it's really high quality as well, I'd like to see some romance, interested in how a 1000 year old virgin would do,,😂😂
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Atryx10
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Atryx10

I have genuinely no fucking clue what the goals of the MC are, nor what's going on. Even if I had any clue about what's going on, it's somewhat of an average story.
5yr
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YesorNo
Writing quality and update stability are good= 4 stars. The story is basically whatever popped into the author's mind on that day... seems unplanned and with no underlying themes. = 2 stars. Character design= Very poor. Not only does the guy have infinite power he has zero motivation. He might as well not exist. Being OP itself is not the problem... interesting OP characters need some trait that makes them relatable, substituting the loss of ******* due to the reader knowing that nothing threatens them. But this guy is bland as ****. = 1 star World background = 4 stars... Naruto fanfic so the world has been directly lifted from it without much modification... the shinto pantheon is mentioned which is rare... good job but could be better.
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OFFLINE23
More chapters please!!! Please don’t drop it like the other authors! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More chapters please!!! Please don’t drop it like the other authors!
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NoKannaNoLife
Shameless reader here.. 5 star this novel because I said so. 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140
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Bezelel666
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ChosenEternally
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WN_grdy_mthr_fker
Really well written novel. i would highly recommend it... its so good i almost don't want to read it chapter by chapter and let it accumulate them and Bench watch them at once but i just cant wait for the next chapter.. also i am loving the speed of chapters being released
5yr
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BreezyNovels
OP MC = Check Cool Crap= Check Above Average storybuilding while some stuff remains canon = Check. Would recommend i love this fanfic. Its above average quality at the least. My opinion though. Check it out for yourself.
5yr
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ElionAVL
There's a minimum of 7 chapters weekly in this novel. It's about a very op mc, who has practically any ability he wants to have, and a companion, named Kurai, a powerful tailed beast, stronger than Juubi, estimated to have 13 Tails, but is not his limit.
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G0DLess
Seems like a very interesting fiction. Mc is basically god and can do what ever he wants. If you like OP mc this could be for you. I’ve only read to chapter 7, but i’m Liking it already. I just hope he doesn’t get nerfed or put some stupid restrictions on himself just because he doesn’t want to stand out to much.
5yr
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