Chapter comments on the chapter Author's Thoughts (Not a chapter) of the book Bleached Multiverse

Why not let white(Ichigo Hollow) absorb is Phoenix Bloodline(Demonic Power) or let the demonic Power create another power in he's Zanpakuto with a little girl form in he's soul space (which will change he's zanpakuto to the first bankai form in shikai and triple (Santoryu hope I write this correctly) sword of the bankai from the fullbringer arc you know the one with the black and white glove and spike on the back of the sword and the 3 sword bound to the middle(mouth) one by a black chain in he's bankai form and IF he use the FINAL Getsuga Tenshou (tensho?) Mugetsu make him have the same power as Shirou/Gilgamesh meaning he can create/call sword (zanpakuto in he's case) which all use Mugetsu at the same time

Ok, sound nice like that, good luck with your following chapter.

Don't worry about it being your first story, your doing really good and have good idea for futur development. Using zelretch as plot armor is a great idea and i approve of going in one piece world (boa hancock would be nice in the peerage), not much a fan of the othee world you mentionned but its fine. Damn, that was one long comment.

I kown that my wish has more or less no chance of becoming a reality but: One of the girl or guy can be Revan of KOTOR 1? The idea of a cheat of a jedi/sith with anime character juste seem too fun (with a f*cking lightsaber!). Something else, do all the character will be humain looking?

Still even with the plot armour, its fun as all hell to read, i had a massive **** eating grin when gilgadouche got his ass handed to him, so that was nice

I'm currently having fun with the story. Hope to read more but I do hope a comedic/funny character appears for lols

what are you talking about? Marvel and DC do have absurd levels of power, but in OPM Ichigo would be classified as a God threat without many problems, he is more powerful than Boros and Garou, with Saitama I couldn't tell you

Thanks for the chapter and all your hard work author Coraulten sorry if i Misspelled your name not to good with names amazing chapter and i love this novel it is absolutely amazing

If you wanted his girlfriends to be more than eye-candy, then don't you think it was a bit counter-productive to let him have four of them? People most of the time barely make one work, a very small percentage can work in two (and that happens over a many chapters). I'm not trying to put you down or anything, but instantly dropping 4 girls on Ichigo without any preparation kind of makes it hard to look at them with any meaning.

Why not let the hollow Ichigo have a body he is the one that wanted the harem the first place.

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Hey author don't doubt yourself that fight was amazing and well written and I am happy that you included shirou, it's what makes your story more unique. Keep up the great work.

Your doing an amazing job with your story it's absolutely wonderful!!!! Keep up the good work!!!! I look forward to the story and how it develops!!!!!!

i really do think their was no point of him being born a devil in the phenex household if you just discard it

Novels amazing not much else to say imo...

Keep up the good work, glad its not a full on herem

You have such a quality about this story that the op-ness in this story mix so well with the power but plz dont go down the way of zambie it will get booring like other intresting story maybe not dont let many clr of

Very nice you have at least a solid foundation about you and the idea you want to develop so best of luck man can't wait to see your work

but what about characters from devil may cry show them what a real devil is like like Donte or Nero

please no harry power crap those guys suck compared to everyone else