Chapter comments on the chapter Kokabiel. of the book Bleached Multiverse

Damn it all to hell!!!!! This is way better than the original!! **** THIS TEARS !!!!!!

The death of Kokabiel in the anime was very cliché, the death you made for him in the fan-fic was much better

All be dammed i spilled my tears for a well reasoned villain who's belief is not to rule the world but for the sake of mankind he loved

Now this. This was a well written chapter.

When an author makes you like the enemy it shows great writing. I always hated Kokobiel. I have to say that you did a damn good job at changing that.

Truth be told, I can't remember a whole lot about the canon, but, regardless, you sir.. are beyond genius. Your writing is testament to that. If I had a hat on, I'd no doubt.. nay, if I had a fedora I'd tip it for you. Absolutely magnificently done sir.

You sometime should have the group go to soul eater universe and have saber meet Excalibur oh the pain she'll go through will be hilarious

👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿that was good

This damn thing really touched T_T

Well, at least his death had a meaning other than pure hate

ALL HAIL KING ARTHUR!!!!!

Damn Anime version can Be cruel sometimes but this is more better than the Anime version

A fan-fic can beter than canon this proved it

I cried dammit noooooo 😭😭😭😭😭😭

This death was really good

That was glorious!!!! I prefer this Kokabiel ,more likeable.

I didn’t read the original yet but this sounds way better to me. This author is fantastic.

i got goosebumps for somereason

Wow, I'm surprise how smooth you change kokabiel from the Canon, but nice to see he is not just some kind of "Filler" villain. Thanks for the chapter

So sad😢😢😭😭 but more better than story of the real one