Chapter comments on the chapter The Monster Feria. of the book Bleached Multiverse

I wouldn’t mind, though I won’t promise the most expert of feedback

Loled so hard when on the *** life talk

Thx for the chapter

Dear Author, I am saddened by the fact that you have deleted an entire chapter. I believe the so called trap you have fallen into was not excessive use of cliche, and innuendo. It was allowing a few random comments from people to dictate the direction of your novel. Instead of using it as constructive criticism and growing from there, you decided to delete a hilarious chapter. Not every chapter will be universally liked, however I saw more comments praising then condemning said chapter. I hope you continue to grow as an author and release this epic novel most of us enjoy

awesome chappy! keep it up, hope to see your next story soon

The Loot Sect thanks you for the wonderful chapter 😇🙏

My Naruto X Yasaka ship....:( But if Ichigo has a Harem why not Naruto...

thanks for the chapter

Thx

Thanks

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter!!!!!!

Coraulten, a Knights will first of all feels way too rushed at the beginning again. Maybe you should dedicate 90-95% of the first chapter just to the reincarnation process. Secondly you could handle the merging of his past persona/experience with his current one better. Changes in ego and the process itself. He doestn have to decide who he is if its „a piece he is missing“ it makes him complete. And my greatest problem with his setting is: Does reincarnation corps hand out systems, powers and quests just like that without a proper qualification or reason? You could have just sent him on after clearing his soul. You should think about a more proper justification for all the stuff. I hope this helps 😁

MOOREE!?!?MOREEE!?!? thanks for the chapter!!

Thanks for the chapter

I’d be more than willing to read a prologue of your next story if you still need people though I’m no expert I know what I like and I definitely enjoy you as an author most definitely my favorite one here without a doubt

This stort is amazing, I specially enjoyed the characters interactions with each other. Thanks for the chapter. Don’t end it too soon.

They're so OP.

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the great chapter. I loved the stamina potion bit