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Exalted_Felix
Ok. I am bored as heck, and so, I decided to make a proper review of this without being biased. Story - 4.6/5 Characters - 4.8/5 World Building - 4.4/5 Romance - 4.6/5 (smut) Writing - 4.9/5 _________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ok, so here is a little summary of the book so far: MC is born with an unknown mutation that makes his body pretty interesting for scientists. Long story short, he becomes a lab rat for years, dies, meets a "system", and goes into the world of Danmachi. Now for the story:- One word - Mysterious. It's basically about going from one world to another. Why? In order to get stronger. Why? To go to another world. Why? To save a certain someone. Now the mysterious part. It's the MC's mother as well as the MC himself. What is he and what is she? Why is his body made up of certain energy and why is he able to travel from one world to another. Simply put, the ability wasn't just handed to him by some god, or it happened randomly. There is something set in motion. You could say, gears of fate turning. The plot itself does feel a bit TOO slow at times, but it manages to pick up later on. Characters:- A really good portrayal of the characters. This is a fanfiction at its core, yet it doesn't follow the plot AT ALL. The MC is in the world of Danmachi years before the plot of canon begins. What does this have to with characters? Well, have you wondered what the characters would be like if the dumbo-harem-aura didn't affect their personality? Well, this is it. MC does get to have a relationship with the girls, but that doesn't affect their personality. Each girl acts in their own unique way and no stuff like "everyone did (insert comedic/dramatic reaction)." The characters are properly fleshed out, and if you pay attention to the core of their personality, there is a portrayal of the weakness of all sentient beings. World-Building:- I don't need to say much about this one. It's a fanfic, basically borrowed worlds. The author describes it well and tries to show a clear image of what it's like. In the end, though, it mostly depends on whether you've seen the original anime/ played the original VN. Romance:- This one's a tough one to describe. How do I put it, "MC loves to love, and his partners love being loved." Basically that. MC is mentally unstable due to what he's gone through in his past life. This makes it very hard for him to differentiate between a lot of stuff. (eg. love & like). This makes the relationships seem almost unnatural, but you mustn't forget that the world isn't Earth. The girls in the anime are totally different from the monstrosities here. It isn't the MC that is mentally unstable. Most of the girls he's with have been through SOMETHING. They all have a past, a wish, and a dream. Also, lots of smut. Writing:- Very good. Mistakes are kept to a minimum and the grammar is fantastic. No headaches while reading. Chapters are also pretty long.
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Bored_Reader_
I mostly write this just to help people understand some of the premise and not be disappointed if they are looking for something else. Now, this is not a wish fulfillment story about travelling across various anime worlds and fighting and adventuring. This is a story about the life of a 14 year old who has spent his entire life in captivity, being exploited by others . Literally. He was found to have panacea like blood as a newborn and was kept in a research facility since he was like a month old. He has not been loved or cared for at all and is just used as a blood producer. His common sense comes only from animes and mangas. Now, you have to understand is that what he does and how he acts is entirely different from normal considering he is a broken, ignorant child. He does not process emotion as casually as we do and is basically just a giant bleeding heart because of his past. Because of this he will not act like shounen protagonists or wuxia MCs at all. They are hot blooded idiots who like fighting, want women and are usually extremely ambitious. Vahn is none of those. He is someone who has been given a life and freedom and just wants to experience it. To him, fighting is a nuisance and despite his claims of being a battle junkie, does not like having fights to the death. He does want to explore, but he has no urgent desire to make it his immediate goal. Understand that this is a rather realistic story of Vahn's growth despite the fantasy tag. He mostly just wants to live in peace and love because of the fact he never had it for the first 14 years of his life. He appreciates it. Some of you like to think of him as a generic japanese protagonist but thing is he grew up watching them as well as suffering great injustice so he has an actual reason to be so merciful. If you expect an MC that goes around all excited and battle hungry or has some vague reason to become the strongest, this is not it. Also, I'll just adress another issue that is going to come up as you progress. He has a huge harem. As in over a dozen girls after the first 100 chapters or so. And the reason for this is because he is a capable male that is highly empathetic and thus becomes attractive to most women who live in a rather shitty world. Also, since he himself has no resistance to others, he accepts basically everyone. He craves love and if someone gives it he'll take her. So yeah, it can become rather unbearable to watch him forsake higher power just to mess around with the harem members and basically start a slice of life but if he doesn't do this, it would be highly unrealistic. This is not a one dimensional novel about fighting progressively stronger enemies and becoming the greatest of them all for no particular reason and neither is it for exploring universes and collecting women. It's about a shattered person trying to enjoy life and fulfill his desires. He wants to explore but won't just leave his family behind for it. He wants to become strong but won't neglect his reason for becoming strong for it. I hope you found this useful.
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Nest0r
Well, this is a ridicuously well-written story. The chapters where he just played with his children in Danmachi were my favourite by far.
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bakaj79
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EnmanuelBM
Muy buena novela me gusta mucho y realmente es una obra maestra
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Ebonyslayer903
Overall great story but the ending was rushed and unfulfilling really a huge let down from such a great author
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RosoviyR
Guys, just drop off the chapter number where all the "unpleasant" events with Freya and so on take place, after reading them you will be able to understand whether this is your cup of tea, and whether it will be possible to tolerate it...
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Lyle_Herbst
It's better dan the original Danmachi I'm at chapter 1444 And its amazing Harem is a bit big but hey man can't complain Hey Author can you do a story about MY THREE BEAUTIFUL WIVES ARE VAMPIRES I vampire story with long and lots of chapters would be awesome
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ThotSlayer_V
Forgot to review so here I am, one of the worst story I have read on Webnovel. The author has a c*ckold fetish, and the Mc isn't likeable, in fact he just feels like a *****. I am only giving 2 stars 🌟 for the writing style, which I have to admit Is pretty good. Now if only you could use that to create a story with a likeable and great MC
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Fuhrer_Ladin
Have not read it till yet cause I am the type of guy who read its in one full flow or I just drop it forever and I ain't got the time yet for 2000 fking chapters but still got to aplaud the author for his work Though I heard its consists of ntr in one scene sighhh.....
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Dillon_Short
This was my first ever fanfic I have read, it introduced me to this type of reading I fell in love with this book it was amazing and sucked me in. The author was in-depth with the story, characters and world. The development of the main character was fascinating and well done in my opinion. I have re-read this book roughly 5 or 6 times and have yet to get bored with it. If you get the time it is definitely worth reading as well as any other fanfic by this author. Thank you for your hard work.
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Daoist537142
This book has been an emotional anchor in my life , I am so glad for you to have made this. I honestly cannot tell others about this from words alone.. If you read this and you like good anime and stories your gonna love this. I swear whenever I get my taxes finalized I will give this author alot of money... I'm really sad that I cannot see Vahn and Co buti hope someone will read this book and make a enter show or movie series or even a Manga out of it . I would pay $3,000 for it. Love you author- san!!!!!!!!
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silent_creator
This story is absolutely amazing I love it Overall everything is okay But there is a problem but it,s okay this story is great slightly slow if you want to read a story with good plot and emotion and good background then it,s okay Try it,it will not disappoint you like
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Cherry_Mage
I like this story and the ideas it has, but it is so slow, I get it can be considered fixing a broken character. However, I am at 230ish in the story and it is still like this, let me know if it gets better later on though.
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Paul_Jones
I personally love this story a bunch but I have problems reading to.much at a time and when I come back I have forgotten a ton and have to be like(what da helll is going)on for a bit. the reason is that it just goes really slow and there is a ton of harem I don't really mind either but it gets overwhelming and I need a break from it every once and a while. it gets way better when he leaves danmachi.
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kimkimkikmikik
Called epik is epik also dont read the previous chapters if you just started reading i managed to escape with few wounds arberabrebarebaerbebare
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Delphantis
Oh how I wish this novel was a typical I want to be the strongest novel or I want to gain eternal life novel. Vahn goes brrr with his Pokémon balls catching every girl he can because he’s super innocent and empathetic. If you like slow strength gains and a bunch of romance/harem stuff then go ahead and read this, if you desire a man with a solid grasp of what he truly wants in life with an impeccable desire to obtain it, this probably isn’t for you.
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Michael_Tofi
This is the story that got me into reading light novels and stuff like this, einlion is still one of my favorite authors after over 5 years of reading. If you’ve read manga or watched anime you will love a lot of his content, you get to see all your favorite characters like you’ve only ever imagined or like you’e never even thought about highly recommend to those over 18.
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Mkai_Ding
This fanfic is all about a boy and countless girls he had. Also, there are only a few males except the MC himself that is mentioned on this story.
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Sicklil
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writing quality: a lot of the time i feel like i don't miss anything of significance if I skip a chapter or three. the first 50 chapters the mc basically doesn't have a functioning memory and has no common sense due to history.story development: its like what if bell was dumber with more plot armor and named something else. we will have similar or identical relationships with all the other people in the story but 3 years early so bell doesnt have to not exist.character design: only gets a marginal score because valid effort was made to play someone who had nearly 0 life experience. honestly probably only deserves a 2.updating dunno ill let it sit at max. there are 2k chapters.world background: its based in danmachi so its solid.
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shambe
I'm just gonna leave this rating here after finishing the story. Idk if there will still be continuation of the epilogue but I will wait for an actual closure of the story.
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OniiChan_UWU
man to be honest the starting was really good . i thought i got a hidden gem but after mc interacting with other girl the story just went downhill. honestly i like harem but not this much bruh he is literally 14yrs old and he is thinking of having child. literally most of the chapter is just about romance. this novel is starting to feel like slice of life novel.
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Michi_Dodo
after all this while i can still say :I Hate This Story
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ProcrastinatiMeem
If I were to think of the Seven Deadly Sins of Fanfiction authors, Einlion will be in Sloth. He writes the same things over and over again, even if it is in variations
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DaoistKvcs4U
Melhor obra de viaje de animes eo sistema de poder e muito bom mais eu não gostei do sentimentalismo do protagonista que em todos os mundo que ele inha ele tentava criar um mundo sem maldades oque praticamente impossível
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