Reviews of Killing Xianxia Protagonists With An AI System In Another World! by AardwarkThe2nd - Webnovel

Brother your dialogues need massive work. Most of the time the conversation doesn't has any emotions. Also you need a editor asap. This thing is barely readable

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I think it will be better if you make his dao companion dominate the other women and make them part of the main battle harem and make the main follow a diferent path than before rather than been emotionless with all make him sever his emotions of everything but the love for his dao companion and make her become the one giving and dominating the women as a good wife.

This is a pretty good story, however one of the bad thing i quite didn't like is how weak the main character is, for someone that is 'immortal'. Overall though a pretty good story, and it will be bettr if you strengthen up the main charactera lot and also fast update wouldn't hurt

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18 chapters and it is still on the prologue?? what kind of **** is this?? 18 chapters and it is still on the prologue?? what kind of **** is this?? 18 chapters and it is still on the prologue?? what kind of **** is this?? 18 chapters and it is still on the prologue?? what kind of **** is this?? 18 chapters and it is still on the prologue?? what kind of **** is this?? 18 chapters and it is still on the prologue?? what kind of **** is this??

I really enjoy your novel, hopefully you haven't quit writing as I don't know how to check upon latest release dates etc... Ofcourse I have things I like and dislike but I prefer reading something made up by you than telling you what I want stuff to be like.. Hopefully you dont get bored of writing

Found this on QQ. Enjoying it more there then here. I just like QQ more then here. Feels easier. As for the story itself, GOOD. This story is easiest A- story I have read. The more it builds, the larger the grade I will give it based on my own subjective opinion.

Has the idea but somewhat lacks the execution, it is basically a hentai novel, not a xianxia protagonist killing novel just yet, could either spew out chapters to get to the point or change title tbh

SO FUCKING BORING TO READ AND ANNOYING!! I THOUGHT MC IS FUCKING OP BECAUSE IT SAYS IN THE FUCKING SYNOPSIS. BUT I DIDNT EXPECT HE IS FUCKING WEAK!! HE IS IMMORTAL?? IMMORTAL YOUR DICK!!! YOU SHOULD CHANGE THE TITLE OF THE NOVEL TOO!! IDIOTIC, MORONIC, WEAK MC KILLING PROTAGINISTS.. AS IF!!!!!

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I really love this stories.the villain MC is always interesting and cool.And I need more chapter to satisfy my thirst here! Please keep up your good work and keep entertain us here!

I've only read the first eight chapters, but I'm already in love with your writing style! This is a must-read for anyone who likes the story from a villain's point of view! My only complaint is that you focussed too much on world building in the early chapters, rather than focusing on characters. And you definitely know how to write naughty scenes. Lol. BTW, why don't you have a cover?!

This is definitely a good read and worth wasting my precious writing for. Anyway, what I really wanna ask is, is it necessary to explain the plot of the story in the last two chapters. I generally like to have it kept a secret. Just saying. Anyway, don't forget to review mine!!! Cyaaaaa

I love a villain MC! I will be keepimg this in my library since I actually love this kind of story (except the R-18 part xD). the novel has a great plot and I'm already liking this novel! Keep up the good work!

I haven't read that many chapters yet, but I really enjoy reading system genre stories that take down plot armor. The R-18 took me by surprise haha, but I'm really looking forward to seeing the MC cut down the protagonist!

I read this because of this novel`s title. I love a villain MC who fight against world`s protagonist. I like the ero scene so far, but i hope author will give more highlight to the story development, and maybe level up MC scum and scheme level. Give some misunderstanding and make him dark hero is always welcome What I like about this story, is how author describe Feng Shiyao (MC`s dual cultivation partner). I like her character design, and I hope she will grow into a yandere haha. If she won`t get jealous over other woman that MC meet, than her feeling is not sincere, and we don`t need that kind of heroine Well, so far it recommendable as long as it won`t go to the polygamy or harem road That`s my opinion, thank you for today`s chapter 🤗

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It's starting to get interesting, but the updates are too little, need more chapters! Also would appreciate a smexy cover page, it would boost ratings if done well and attract more readers. Potentially good novel and the whole protagonist smiting theme is great! Rob the pu$$ies from the damn protagonists and make harem plz!

Great book just reviewing it again, I love the story. So far likrable character, fun idea for a system definitely a must read! I all can say is not enough chaps

It's a good story, I am quite eager to read more of it. Keep it up! ajfanvgjbxivbgaeouhgwipandgvsohgdvsHIIRTUEHGVSPIHVGWSJFB'VIHSRGIWipdgvo;ahug'rdthnb;idht'stabhjod'hrie'og;rsdnthine'othbisrdtnh'bsridjth'ndth'edt'bziteds

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it was a hidden gem that i found while i was bored but it was worth it i expect more chapters from the author. Author please realese more i'll pump you out power stones and please add a cover it'll be more presentable y'know.

Read this Now! First 2 chapter blew me away with quality and originality. The character I love him, and system even better. Obivously read only if your older but lets be honest... your going to read. Just becauae i saud only if your older. But start pumping those power stones into the author's blood stream!