I really like the story development and characters.
World background looks to be thought out pretty good and described well.
One issue with the this story is that the "he" and the "she" get mixed up a lot, frequently during "R-rated" activates.
I just binged red this story so I don't know about Stability of Updates or anything like that, sorry.
New reader here, finished all 53 chapters in 2days. Really want more!!!!!
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Ever since i become aware of the bl world from series to novel and the ia one of the nove that i like not for the se scene but for the plot of the story in how a modern woman enter a man's body in ancient time....
This story is so much fun and has all the attributes I like. You know like reincarnation, bl, smut ( okay i know that I'm just being shameless 😅😅😅😤😤😤😤😛😛😛), and this one gender -blender..... so ya this is the the type of book i have been searching for!!! I hope you can continue writing this story much futher.... um,.. like "the way of the sword" at least that many chapters for now. And also please, please, please, update a bit more regularly Author-sama. Anyway I want more chapters!!!!
Take care Take_the_Moon!!!
And keep writing 😈😈😈👿👿👿👿
I love this story
so much thrill
it make me happy and thrill at the same time
I'm in love with this story
I love it
Thank you author for this story
It makes my day and make me smile 😘😙
And love you 💓❤️😘😘😘
Thete are a lot of grammer mistakes, and the story is a little too long. Some things are exaggerated, and the story likes to repeatedly talk about MC's beauty.
The gender of the MC is ever changing. One minute he could be a girl, one minute he could be a boy. Please stick with one gender. (preferably a boy, because this is a BL novel.) It might not be a problem for some readers but I really don't like it when there is a 'she' in a BL novel.
It is fine overall, the explanations about everything is very detailed, maybe too much that it bored the readers. The main storyline is barely there, because all the words are used to explain this and that.
If you are looking for a good read, this may not be your cup of tea, but if you are just here to pass time, this is fine.
I really enjoy this story.. and i didn't expect the romance to so fast paced 🤣
I like the plot overall but i think it was a shame that there wasn't much development for Chu Jiayi. We didn't get to see how she copes being in a male body all of sudden but I'll see how it goes as the author can still focus on that later.
I know it's to early to write a review but whoj cares. I'm already in love in this story. It's unique huhu and the very interesting is that a woman(don't know her age meh \ -3- / ) soul transfer to a male but i love yaoi stories being gay is cool and unique
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Very interesting so far. Altho R18 in the beginning, the storyline plot is not lacking at all. Plot development is going at a good pace. Eagerly anticipating what will happen when more characters are added.
Am on chapter 11. Alright, so the premise seemed fairly interesting at first, what with the cool, cold lady MC (who's actually kind of an otaku) transmigrating into the body of a canon fodder villain and all. The world-building is very good and interesting and provides lots of background information to better understand what's going on in the story.
Reading it, however, is actually a bit different. There are some grammatical errors, but those could be overlooked if you're tolerant. The writing itself is somewhat choppy, but again, it can be overlooked. The problem mainly lies within the characters and the pacing of the story. The characters, the main character and the male lead, might seem fine at first, bit their interactions... I don't know, seems a bit false, but that might just be the very fast pacing. Their relationship develops rather quickly, and affection quickly builds even though they are effectively strangers who just decided to have sex together. My point of confusion lies mainly with the male lead, who should be far more wary and far less affectionate with someone who he thought to be scum.
Another thing that is a bit weird is how OP the main character is. And how irrelevant his/her OPness seems to be. For example, it's mentioned that (s)he has sets of legendary creatures like phoenixes and dragons, but they don't really do anything expect be a point of gossip for random passersby. The yin constitution that the MC has just seems to be an excuse for him/her perform dual cultivation with the ML in their first meeting. HOWEVER! Please keep in mind I didn't actually read that far in the story, so these points (and possibly others) could actually become relevant.
So basically, if you want an easy, fun read w/ some grammatical errors, this is for you! It's BL, it already has some smut, has good world-building, and has an OP couple! A thing I liked was how the MC brought his/her modern/futuristic knowledge to the past and improved the state of life there. But if you want a serious read with development that makes sense, maybe look elsewhere. But please, give it a try and make your own judgment on it; don't think my review defines the entire story.