80% One piece: Journey with a system / Chapter 4: Orange Hair

Chapter 4: Orange Hair

After we decided what we are going to do. I was tasked with getting Zoro's shword.

"Luffy I am going to get the shword, you free Zoro and I will go"Artz said and he left for the shword in the direction of building

On his way he used his law to of sleep for his book and he was able to pass the guard without any problems.

( Nami's pov )

When I was searching for map and treasures to save my village I went to shells Island and in marine base there I saw a boy and my heart skipped a beat when I saw him. He wore a brown cap on his head, he wore a goggles,he had black hair which wasn't too long and not too short it was perfect, he had a white shirt on it he wore a half brown coat, a black pant and pair of black leather shoes it was a new felling for me. That calm and beautiful face with the felling of a person who care for others in his beautiful eyes.

(end)

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When Artz saw Nami he saw she was looking at him with a look that she had found something she was looking for a long time.

"Hello beautiful miss can you tell me the way to the captains office I am new here "Artz said with a smile that made Nami had a blush but she had no time for that cause she was in need of money for her village

"No sorry I am also new here so I will not be able to help "Nami said with a tansion on her face

"it's fine and sorry for wresting your time have a nice day "with that he passed her

She was thinking of something and also left.

Artz finally found Zoro's 3 shword and he was getting let so Luffy was inpatient to wait for him he like the original shot for sky and broken Morgan statue and came in to find Artz had 3 shword

"Thy are there 3 "Luffy

"I don't know which one is Zoro's so, I took all 3"Artz

"Nice let's go"Luffy said with a smile and Artz followed behind him.

When they came out they found that Nami was caught by the marine and Zoro was about to get execute. They were going to shoot at Nami and she was regenerating coming here. Everything will end for her now she closed her eyes.

Artz signaled Luffy to go for Zoro and gave him shword's and he went for Nami.

When Marines shoot at Nami she was waiting for her death then she heard the sound of the gun shoot but she didn't die and found she was in the leap of that boy whom she meet before.

[ (In Slow motion )

Artz used his book book fruit to slow down time and shift himself from there and caught Nami in neck of time then hug her from there and move before the bullet could hit her.

(End) ]

"Hey Miss aren't you Marine. So, why would thy want to kill you "Artz asked her while putting her down

"when did I say that "Nami asked him back

Shaikh_Tohaa Shaikh_Tohaa

I was thinking about which way should I go with the story so it took me a while to get a new way from the original works to different one to continue so I started in a new way the story to make it flow.

There will be 1 chapter a day but I didn't write for a while so 2 chapters today.

And sorry I will not be able to write 1k words per chapter cause I have to think about the story to write.

Comments (4)

  • Ancient_Reader

    Ancient_Reader

    Thanks for the chapter :) It's sword not shword.

  • starlin

    starlin

    Thanks Its regret not regenerate

  • March8

    March8

    Wresting is wasting .Few other mistakes that need to be fixes. Great chapter .😄

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