Chapter comments on the chapter Prologue of the book REINCARNATION OF A SUPERSTAR (BL)

Hey not a bad start I suppose tho I would consider getting someone to edit this as it would make things much more smooth and immersive it kinda breaks the flow with the misspelled words and sometimes there are incorrect words or letters missing it’s not terrible since English isn’t your first language but it could use some touching up

Author is here, so my previous account is not active anymore due to some problems I encounter to this app. So I did a new one to see what's happening to my stories. If you want to continue to read this story please reply in this comment and maybe I will post the rest of the chapter in this new account, I will make a effort so that who doesn't have a Wattpad account would be able to read this story, and thanks for supporting it.

Well, it is certainly "random" like you stated, author. The MC getting stabbed by his star w/o preamble or w/o a hint that their working relationship is in tatters, is just too abrupt and w/o the emotions conveyed properly with the readers. Getting stabbed by someone you are close to deserves a certain kind of gravitas that this chapter lacks.

The title has a BL in it so I click it and it's also has to do with showbiz so I might just try this one

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This chapter makes no sense.

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Thanks. The boy has issuses big time. Poor MC.

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Loving this already.

Interesting start, grammar could use some editing, but plot seems fun so far! :)

ookaaay🤔

Thanks for the chapter, for someone who doesn't have English as there first language you're doing a real good job. :D

Is this BL??