I personal love bl so please add more with smut in it oh please wor on grammar.................................................................................................................................................
The grammar is little bit off but what the heck!! Its one hell of a story. I loved it. Please keep translating...... I like the way both the mc and his best friend James got their man. It would be cherry on top of the ml could be more rough I mean to the enemies he he he. Please translate faster in the future please...... it would be nice if there would villian or third party interested in mc Liam. You know he is so cute and adorable. A man of status like the ml who can put some taste and charm in the love story.
I enjoyed this book and was giggling constantly, gotta love the dense characters hehehe ;) this is a very loving book and thank you for the smut warnings (so I could find an hidden spot we’re no one could hear me squeal) your writing style is good but you could have made a more in-depth description of what happened between time periods and the growth of the relationships between the characters. I thoroughly enjoyed this, I hope to see more in the future.
Keep up the good work!!!
From a loving fan!
Author is here, so my previous account is not active anymore due to some problems I encounter to this app. So I did a new one to see what's happening to my stories.
If you want to continue to read this story please reply in this comment and maybe I will post the rest of the chapter in this new account, I will make a effort so that who doesn't have a Wattpad account would be able to read this story, and thanks for supporting it.
Hello guys I'm the author of this story and I can't continue this story anymore because this account I can't open it anymore I tried and tried but the thing is I only made numerous new accounts in webnovel if you want to read the continuation you can see it in wattpad with the name account of justbooks18 and tge title are still same. Thats all thanks
Okay I just read to chapter six and in all honesty I’m not gonna read any further untill some editing has been done since it has been devolved into the level of a machine translated story I feel like if the author can fix the mistakes the story would be quite good but honestly the grammatical errors and the fact that the way it’s written is similar to how a child who has just started speaking talks is ruining this for me
There are words missing incorrect tense used spelling mistakes while not many from what I could tell are still there I really want to like this story but untill it has been edited HEAVILY I might add I will not be returning I don’t mind that it’s bl and transmigration type stories are one of my favourites I sincerely hope the author will take an editor into consideration since he has decided to write a novel in English
I have only read one chapter so far so I will be sure to update this review in the future
The grammar spelling mistakes incorrect words etc break the flow of the story as I have to stop myself sometimes and try and figure out what is actually being said
I also feel that the first chapter moves very quickly with very little world building or any build up whatsoever which I feel is necessary since unlike quick wear world hopping novels this is different
I appreciate that the authors first language isn’t English however the use of an editor or someone to look it over and make sure that the errors are caught and remedied would make this story much better
I love this story!!! When I was trying to find some BL Light Novel to read, and I come across this... I thought that the cover art was beautiful so I check it out, but somehow I ended up reading it and it was... GREAT!!!
I don't see much BL scenes in it but the plot was wonderful! I love it!!!
I like this story!
But a liitle minus in grammar. But if i put it a side i like this story! And i very like the story development!
Finally i really like the ML! So domineering! 🎉🎉😘😘
I hope this story not been drop for sure! 😤😤😅
I think you should improve your writing, some of your chapter is not that good, and please clarify your story cause sometimes you cant feel the yaoi vibe in their, but over all its okay.
I think your good even though english is not your first langauge.
Continue writing stories.