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Bob_Uchiha_XD
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sdoryfinder
Hey there!
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Will_Caruso
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ikoyo
Nice work. This book should have been completed in this plate. It's so unfortunate that the author is taking his works somewhere else. I wish him the best of all life endeavors.
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ikoyo
Another nice chapter. The twist is in the MC lining up on the British commando. The British and Americans were allies in World War 2. Am kind of confused as to why they should be short at by their American allies.
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ikoyo
Another good one from the author. Keep them coming. We are here ready to recieve them. Thanks for making my day less boring. Am always on the watch for your next chapter.
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ikoyo
Great chapter. INCOMING! RUDE AWAKENING is on the way. Another nice chapter. Kudos to the author once again. Please get soon. Sorry for the illness.
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ikoyo
Great work in generally. Though am missing those heaven defying descriptions of combat. I encourage you to release more of those action packed scenes.
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ikoyo
Another great chapter. The tempo gradually increases with each word until it gets to the climax. The author also keeps to his word by bringing out more chapters like he promised.
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ikoyo
Another great chapter. The author has delivered another masterpiece. Nice work. All your efforts are appreciated by readers like me. Please try to increase the frequency of releasing each chapter.
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DeJeL
*Remember, this review is based off the first 5 chapters*
Constructive Criticism: You're update rate was very fast in the beginning, got slower, then almost completely stopped... this is not very stable... I suggest coming up with a schedule whereas you can write more than your schedule requires and just post them according to the schedule regardless of how many you have written.... also, if you are in the USA (not sure if you are... if not please disregard this part) there is normally such thing as a public library you can access internet from for about an hour a day depending on library.;,;. It seems like (other than chapter 1 which seems like 3K+ words) your chapters tend to be around 2.5K words each... while I think this is fine (from 1K-3K) most like chapter lengths to be 1K-2K staying closest to 1.5K... However, even I think that your first chapter was a bit on the long side... now would I change it, probably not... I just suggest not making any future chapters so long.;,;. I also spotted a single error w/in your first 5 chapters... at one point you talked about how the MC was "unharmed and unharmed" I think one of those were meant to be 'Unarmed' but you typed 'Unharmed' twice.;,;.
Positive Feedback: Your story flowed, had a strong MC, interesting plot, and well defined world (our own in our not so recent past).
Personal Feedback: I did think you did well, but this story is just not appealing to me... keep up the good work, and don't quit.;,;.
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MerielDaMery
Enough with this **** why hasn't this been reviewed more c'mon the concept of the story is great and historically grounded. Plus it's very realistic because no bull**** OP super powers just grit and gut mixed with skill. just try it .....""drops the mic"""......
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WinterBud
GIVE IT A TRY, GOOD GOD, JUST READ A FEW PARAGRAPHS (and ignore the minor grammar misses, psst, author, install a Grammarly widget to help you edit before you publish, might also want to go back to all the chapters to iron out most of the kinks [e.g., please capitalize "german/y"], that would make this perfect) THE AUTHOR CLEARLY KNOWS WHAT HE'S DOING.
My only gripe: I'm in love with Angela Merkel, and I really like what Germany has become 70+ years after WWII, so I guess being reminded of their horrible past makes me a little uncomfortable, but that's my problem as a reader. I have a similar problem with Japan's horrible actions against other nations in the past.
I've only read up to chapter 3, but I'll def be reading on.
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The_Guy_Dies
Nice and amazing story its the best! XD XD XD Xd Xd Xd XD XDXD XD XD Xd Xd Xd XD XDXD XD XD Xd Xd Xd XD XDXD XD XD Xd Xd Xd XD XDXD XD XD Xd Xd Xd XD XDXD XD XD Xd Xd Xd XD XD
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DamnPlotArmor
Amazing concept and story! Though, there are typos here and there, but it can be ignored because the story was so captivating.
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Celestial_monk
I like it...................................... i dont have nothing to say as i dont want people to seee my review before reading the novel..............................................................
Why are you still reading fuk off
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ikoyo
Great work. Good knowledge of the Italian campaign. The author has a good grasp of military operations and the chain of command. The description of events are so vivid that i can literally picture the actions as they are unfolding. The use of suspense is wonderful. In fact a big kudos to the author and a bug thank you to web novel for giving the author the platform to express himself.
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killermniko
The story seems good. Having been around the Army, a few things in the story bothered me. Physical fitness training didn't get regulized till the late 1940s. Most draftees got little to no training at all and were shipped out. I guess I can chalk it up to the time traveling. My experience with "Army Leaders" suggest they would not change their ways from just a dcument, but that's just my opinion. Overall, I like how you presented creative training environments for the recruits. The story flows really well and descriptive conversation. The story has a grand objective and moving towards it. A definite must read for those interested in a twist on real life events.
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The writing done well. I found almost no mistakes. 5/5
You are regularly updating the novel and posted a new chapter frequently. 5/5
The story is going along very well. We know the goal and the motivation for the characters which is very important. 5/5
The main character is refreshing and has a sense of purpose to the story. 5/5
The only thing, I feel your story lacking good background descriptions. I've read quite a few diaries and retaleing of wars from POV books. The stories list so many details such as the smells, the sights, and the sounds. I think with a bit more descriptions you would have a fantastic story. 4/5
Either way, super exciting story. Best of luck to you author.
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BoredPanda
GREAT CONCEPT!!!
Writing Quality is really great, easily understandable sentences, wide range of vocabulary, it's amazing how you describe war scenes.
Stability of Updates is also good, no complaints.
Story Development is GREAT!! Going back in time, changing the course of events and how the war will result. Amazingly executed scenes.
Character Design is great, soldiers in the war zone, how unique.
World Background is also good.
Overall, it's great. The first chapter already got me so hooked I can't stop reading. I'll be adding this on my Library and I hope this story will continue to the end.
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Hokobishu
Shameless review!
This story may be for you if you are looking for a novel with:
a) No magic
b) The grittiness and horror of war
c) Reliving the greatest war in our history
d) Nazi experiments
e) Hitler riding a Saber-tooth Tiger on his birthday
f) Skipping E because it sounds dumb
If any of these appeal to you, this might be the right novel for you! Multiple chapter releases every weekend, I try to write a chapter per day on the weekdays!
Instant contact with the author! There are several ways to contact me and I always reply to my comments!
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LWEndless
A great start, full of authentic detail, to an intentive take on the alternative history genre.
Worth a read for anyone interested in World War 2.
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