Reviews of Battle Royale of the Sinners by DamnPlotArmor - Webnovel

I'm going to put my humble self at average 3 stars because I'm not shameless enough to show off my broken English and cringe worthy of terrible grammar I put into this novel. I promise that I will trying my best to keep up with at least one chapter a day. Eventhough it took me two freaking days to come up with the first chapter. For some reason, every times I reread my work, I ended up fixing things here and there. 10 drafts later, I still found flaws and kept deleting this line and added this line. 20 hours later, I was banging my head against the wall and gave up rechecking the quality and post it here right away. Please have mercy on this poor soul and go easy on me ... MEAW!

This isn't your typical reincarnation story. Which is pretty great in my opinion. If you enjoy stories about war or anything related to the romance of the three kingdoms. You would enjoy this story despite its flaws. The main character isn't extremely over powered and the author was able to devise a proper balancing mechanic in the beginning. If I only read the first half of the story I would've of given it a 5.0. The reason why I had to rate it a lower level is because of several reasons. The first reason is the main character is starting to become a different person. In the beginning of the story you are introduced to a main character that understand he isn't a genius. He has to be cautious and mindful of all his actions. Its the reason why he spent so much time and effort to recruit capable strategists. He gathers information, asks for opinions before he makes any major decisions. Yet, now the main character no longer asks for their opinions and makes rash decisions. The second reason is the main character doesn't exactly understand how the mechanisms of this world actually work. Neither does his lover who was a demon from hell. Her mother does and shes currently in the world as well. If it was the former main character after he discovered she was in this world he would've of asked her how the rules of the world work in order to make himself stronger and used this advantage against other sinners. But this hasn't happened which makes it even more infuriating! The third reason is a pretty big one. You know whats worse than a omnipotent and omniscient main character? An omnipotent and omniscient antagonist. Don't you love novels when the antagonist/s is able to predict, anticipate and convince every other person in the world to go after the main character for no reason at all? Whats the likelihood a person in modern earth would have extensive knowledge of the waring states in china? Unless you are obsessed with dynasty warriors, a war tactics addict or dramas from this period its very unlikely. Yet the remaining sinners are all quite knowledgeable about this period. Hell even the former antagonist that was the sole mortal enemy to the main character was. Which wouldn't make any sense with his backstory. The fourth reason is the novel no longer has any "balance." In the beginning of the novel we had a system where you'd lose lifespan when you used a skill. The "players" in the world had a advantage over the natives because of their skills, but they had to pay in lifespan. For example one of the sinners has a skill that can can create anything. From skills from other people, to gold, to even clones of other people. He can literally make anything. How the **** is this even legal. No, how isn't this person dead already. This isn't a skill its a goddamn console command. The author is nerfing the main character while buffing his opponents. Did the main character end up playing ******** mode? The fifth reason is the current plot has become so convoluted it can be frustrating for a new reader to get into the novel. A perfect example is in the story we learn that heaven and hell exists. You have angels and demons and humans can become either one after they die depending on their karma. So in that case what the hell is a cultivator? Is he just a angel than because he has angel wings? Why is he trying to turn the native population in world into angels? Why is it possible for a sinner to become a angel? With all their negative karma aren't they more suited to become demons instead? Wasn't the reason why they came into the world was so wash away their sins? Wasn't the reason they came into this world in the first place? But now without completing the game they can just become angels?! Why isn't their a demon trying to turn the native population into demons? We learn that heaven and hell went to war, but we don't know the reason. We haven't had any chapters dedicated to it either. I'm not trying to be nitpicky I actually want the author to succeed. Hes working hard and hes pretty dedicated and it sucks to see the novel in such low rankings. In my honest opinion this novel probably needs a remake to make it more palatable to new audiences. The karma thing you had with the main character and the dead antagonist would've of been more interesting. For example after he died his soul could have ended up corrupting or taking over another sinner making that person want to kill the main character for revenge. Or he could've been consumed by his heart devil in his lust for power. Maybe he could've of corrupted the angel? The angel seems to have potential to be the final boss, but in current plot shes just a minor villain which really wastes her potential. I really enjoy your other novel by the way. You might want to rename it and give it a better cover I'm sure you'd get a lot more interest that way. Its a shame you need to focus on this one more.

This is a very addicting book.Best book on heaven hell and redemption. This fully brings out your inner Angel demon.it also teaches history in a fun way. This is a book for the strong not the weak. I also know how many souls of sin and souls of virtues I have. I hope the author finishes it quickly but I will give him the time he needs

You wasted this book's potential, I don't even know where u got the idea of the mc have a weird girlfriend. probably, you must be thinking that it would be fun but you're absolutely wrong

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Why does the cover look like a game or something? .....................................................................................

I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.

I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.

It was an ok self insert, until the protagonist did a 180 after claiming he didn't want to be a harem protagonist, and sticks his dick in a disgusting cannibal girl, cheating on the girl he's supposedly in love with. For a fucking disgusting cannibal... Yeah I don't even fucking understand anymore, it's like the author just couldn't keep it in his pants all of a sudden, we already had a romance subplot going on, and the author just straight up ruins it out of the blue after previously committing to not doing so :|

What the **** is happening. In chap 354 mc gives all his skills to his subordinates lyk what the ****. I was enjoying this but I think I may have wasted my time so if someone is reading this then i think you shouldn't continue cuz at the end of the day mc gives all his skills to his subordinates. Fuuccccckkkk this is really frustrating,I have wasted my time on this.

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This story is so great that I always check to see the number of readers and I still can't believe that it's only 2M lyk what the **** man😤. But the problem I have with this novel is the way he is trying to make the side characters possess powers equal to mc for example: Lu bu later gets Angel wings like what the **** are u doing he is not part of the grand scheme so why dafaq does he get Angel wings which will make him almost equal to the main characters.

I came from villain cultivator and I'm not gonna lie, it's obvious the difference from his 'humble ' beginning s. The thing is, there is also obvious improvement and if you came to be entertained, this story delivers. Give it a try.

great novelnow for the rest of this review why does it need ao many words just why there are other ways to anger people app please let me post.

One of the first original works I have read, this story is not inferior to the translated works offered on this site. I enjoyed the comedy, action, and story telling the author developed and hope people enjoy it the same way I did.

Aight the story changes over time but you know what, it’s fine since overall it’s a fun read with good action, good comedy, and an interesting story.

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The novel is so good 5 star for me

What the fuk !! Kill that ***** Hua Shi!! , c c c. C. C. C.

This is one of the best novel I've read the world background story development is so good so l rate this five star .....................................................

Great novel for fantasy one. An over used rotk timeline yet a freshing story. Nice work. Sadly the ending are a bit rush but its oke. Hope to see you on other novel.

So I have not actually read much of this. But honestly this gives me HIGH EXPECTATIONS for this novel. I really am excited to read more of this and I love the concept that it is built on.

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Shit hits the fan constantly and I love it. MC just a smartass who can kick butt and the fact that this isn’t in the top ratings saddens me because this novel makes me laugh and get excited in one sitting.

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Is this hentai fanfic? Because it feels like hentai fanfic. Whats with all those harem novels focusing on tingling crotch? And those cringy references... Well, off i go looking for battle royale novel which isnt so cringy 14 yr edge lord style.

I am in awe how this is an original work since the story and plot are much greater than most official works with translators and editors. The author is a genius and extremely ‘cultured’. The novel is quite lewd so it would not be for the pure at heart.

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