Love it, Good Grammar, Author uploads 1 or 2 chapters a day
Mc doesn't think with his d*ck
Mc isn't an egoistic asshole
Mc isn't too op but is still Really Strong
author constantly skips small but important details. its basically just a watered down version of the original with a boring op mc. ....................
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5 STAR BECAUSE IM REVIEW NUMBER 70 AND I BROKE THE PERFECT REVIEW NUMBER OF 69
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I just finished reading the story and as I expected it to be it matches with my tastes. 😋
I just finished reading the story and as I expected it to be it matches with my tastes. 😋
Great fanfic, he became a little too OP otherwise would have seen great developments, he could have bought a new super villian powerful enough to compete with Michele
The one thing I will give the author is that their grammar is, for the most part, good. In terms of grammar, the story is readable and not difficult to interpret.
Other than that, the story is pretty bad. The author adopts a tell approach instead of showing. For example, the main character is supposed to have extreme intelligence. However, there are several occasions where they act like a complete idiot. Another problem comes in the form of the mcs martial arts training. The author writes that they are capable of beating martial arts masters, but the mc shows virtually no fighting ability. We are told that the mc beats masters in one scene, but shown the mc nearly losing a fight to a theoretically weaker opponent in the form of Muscular.
I tried to read it all the way through because I saw some decent reviews, but I simply couldn't. The story is far too inconsistent to enjoy.
Я любитель и ценитель сверхсильных главных героев, но зачастую сюжет с такими персонажами идёт плохо, да и сам персонаж может быть прописан плохо. И тут есть все эти недостатки! ГГ добрый и светлый просто потому, у него нет своей цели, у него нет своих мыслей, он просто дешёвый дублёр супермена. И всё было бы ничего, был бы обычный средненький фанфик, но характер персонажа выводит из себя...
В общем произведение молодого идеалиста, который ещё не понял как устроен мир, и ещё ещё делит ещё на добро и зло.
Gostaria de ler muito mais, história interessante e agradável, pena termina com poucos capítulos. Espero poder ler mais em breve. Obrigado ......................... ..............
hey writer i like this novel very much please continue it without dropping.if possible update atleast 1 chapter 1 week.............................................................................................
Had potential to be a great novel but then the author decides to make him only to unlock his full power at the age of 21 so way after the entire plot of BNHA lol and he changes the kryptonian powers to him glowing gold and choosing what to enhance like strength or speed.... it’s not even kryptonian powers it’s just some cheap knock off
The story is great and fun to read. I like the MC , he it's smart and strong. Keep up the good work and update faster. I hope he doesn't become too arrogant.
I like this a lot, will hope for stable updates. slower than other fanfics but has a solid character, though outright dumb at times. This is a good way to burn time without hard nitpicking.
It's alright, and we understand school can be stressful!
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Hey his powers should activate when he is 18 right? Why so early? And why is he getting his powers early? You should stated that his powers will awaken as well as the kryptonian powers when he turns 4 or 5 so there won't be misunderstandings cause I'm totally confuse right now
Superman is supposed to be FASTER then speeding bullets
Dude, WTF? With each chapter, you weaken krytonian power again and again.
The next thing you know, Michael will be killed by Mineta bacause mineta's balls stuck to michael face
I don't like this mc att all! He does not behave like a human. He is portrayed like Jesus on steroids- no desires for himself at all. I mean even good heroes have desires for themselves rather just helping everyone. Also, MC is forced to be this stupid Super-Jesus by the author without any context for any other reason then (JUST BECAUSE)
It started quite nice but as i progress to later chapters, i would always find myself either cringing or getting irritated 🤯
Too bad i really like the plot
Pyrre Out
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I am big fan of superman but i never thought of supuerman in my hero . just great idea dont destroy it by doing tipickle fan fick troupes you have gold mine here
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