Reviews of Rogue Immortal: Immortal Rise From The Coffin, Back To Zero. by DrunkenShadow - Webnovel

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*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: Chapter length is too small, you even said your chapters were roughly 800 words, while small is normally 1K words and large is normally 2.5K words, so your's are definitely too small... also, to practically release ALL your novel in one go is not a stable release rate, I would have suggested just uploading one chapter a day (place them on a timed release if nothing else) and when you decided to stop writing, add that to the list of To Be Released chapters and have it posted the same day as the last chapter would have been posted, that way if you changed your mind B4 it was posted, you could have continued... and if not, then you at-least gave them a stable release rate while it lasted.;,;. Now for a more personal CC: I suggest you don't stop writing for the people, because I always suggest writing for yourself, not for others, so you should not allow others to stop you from writing either. Positive Feedback: When reading the first 5 chapter shorts, I actually felt like I read at-least 4 chapters, and that's hard to do with chapters that are about 1/2 a chapter each.;,;. Personal Feedback: Even if you had continued your story, I would not have... sorry it's just not my cup of tea... I do suggest you give your readers another chance and try to continue your story tho.;,;. Score: WQ 4/5 SoU 4/5 SD 5/5 CD 5/5 WB 5/5

Story at the beginning didnt have good grammar but later on the story got better and better, you should just ignore those that hasn't even read the recent chapters. Like after the few 10-20 chapters, there was a significant change in how the story was written. The beginning was bad but author tried and got better. Unlike those people who don't appreciate anything

Life love liberty a story for ages to form from time and place spread far but cut wide filled will hope but smothered in negativity proven for free but ripped for cost played by thought but crushed by perception

Hey Man I just wanna say that I personally loved your novel. I don't know if this will help in any way. I really hope you will come back and continue to write this novel. You should just ignore the negative comments. Sometimes you get people who wanna help by giving suggestions and sometimes you get others that are just trolls. Hope you will continue this novel someday. Please stay positive, and just know I at lease respect whatever decision you make. Thanks man.

Author must have #1 MENTAL FORTITUDE Dude, you shouldn't let criticism drown you like that. Every author/entertainer out there gets criticised by A LOT of people. Heck, this includes the writer of the Harry "FCKIN" Potter series, granted said criticisms got beat by the praises and sales result. Point is, no matter what you do, you'll get criticised by people (some will praise you of course). It boils down to how you handle this setback. Are you gonna be a QUITTER or a FIGHTER?

This is more of a comedy and retarded novel about an immortal who lets his wife be ****ed by the headmaster of the school. The element of cultivation is completely gone after the mc's cultivation being sealed. The mc's woman is 16 for fks sake. Even at the latest chapter 33, the mc has not bothered to cultivate and the system is the same arrogant retard system that made the mc have erectile dysfunction for being bad to the system. The English is not that good either. The mc quickly starts acting like a Japanese anime pervert mc after having his cultivation sealed and watches his wife get fingered by another woman. I don't know how people rated this 5\5 in the story category. The novel loses the main focus which is the cultivation and quickly goes full pervert. Nothing great. The mc's woman is 16, again, pedo. The mc is supposed to be immortal but behaves like a 15 yr old Japanese pervert anime protagonist.

The only criticism I have is that the story is written a bit messily. For example, I do not understand who the narrator is. Is it first person? 3rd Person? Omniscient narrator? Observer? A person who’s part of the story? It’s hard to tell. The story is interesting though, we have an MC who has reached the top and now tries i think again, but with a different route. Keep it up!

Nah! this story has potential but it is being wasted author constantly breaks the 4th wall to explain exposition which feels weird this world doesn't have any descriptions and it feels like characters have one dimension and they don't feel and come alive. You should slow the pace and try to write what they feel instead of telling you should show. that's it and I will re-edit the review if you can do that thanks!

My honest thoughts: Writing quality: 3/5 - Incorrect use of Punctuation. A lot of words in the middle of the sentences are capitalized. - Strange and inconsistent use of single quotes and double quotes: 'World', ''Moon Light'', 'Sky'. Sometimes conversations don't get quotes. Other times, action descriptions are put in quotes: ''After she jumped down from the bed Ye Ruoxie didn't panic, but adjusted her dress and hair, afterward she looked at the fainted maid.'' You should work out a rule and stick with it. Story 3/5 - Spirit, Array, Awakening, etc. The story seems to require some knowledge of xianxia or wuxia tropes and concepts. But you should restrain yourself. Don't throw new terminologies left and right without context or explanation. Character 2/5 - I don't like any of the characters. They don't seem to have any motivation or personality. But that's just me. World BG 3/5 (?) - The world is confusing. Cultivation is the norm here, but you referenced KFC and so on.

Very interesting writing and story! Super standout comedy moments! A recommended read. Writing quality: 3/5 some parts are hard to understand Updates: 3/5 infrequent Story: 5/5 the twists are really good so far, but confusing Characters: 5/5 fun and funny! World: 5/5 interesting but confusing.

Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation I almost did not read this novel, because of its cover believing it was yaoi 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...

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One of his friends, for the readers, try it, don't judge the book by a review, we are just trying to spread this book for more views, reviews, it's boring to write 1k-1.5k words chapters without know if t was good or bad, hope you understand, if you don't like it then curse or give negative comment , it's ur thoughts anyway. View More

One of his friends, for the readers, try it, don't judge the book by a review, we are just trying to spread this book for more views, reviews, it's boring to write 1k-1.5k words chapters without know if t was good or bad, hope you understand, if you don't like it then curse or give negative comment , it's ur thoughts anyway. View More

One of his friends, for the readers, try it, don't judge the book by a review, we are just trying to spread this book for more views, reviews, it's boring to write 1k-1.5k words chapters without know if t was good or bad, hope you understand, if you don't like it then curse or give negative comment , it's ur thoughts anyway. View More

One of his friends, for the readers, try it, don't judge the book by a review, we are just trying to spread this book for more views, reviews, it's boring to write 1k-1.5k words chapters without know if t was good or bad, hope you understand, if you don't like it then curse or give negative comment , it's ur thoughts anyway. View More