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Writing quality: 1 horrible i see so many mistakes in one paragraph
Updating: dont know 2
Development: to fast you barely get ahold of the situation 3
Character design: 2 terrible nothing interesting
World: 1
*Kyokai Suigetsu*
The serious review is gone. It was just an illusion.
When did you think it was a real review?
I can tell that you've never been true to me
I can smell that you're acting so fearfully
I can hear what you're hoping I want to hear
I can feel the alarm bells are ringing in me
I can touch but I know you don't feel a thing
I can pray but I know you commit a sin
I can sense now it's all become clear to see
You're no good ,and you mean no good treacherously.
Soooo good
SAO br? Astonishing! Absolutely Amazing!
Anyways interesting plot, gud character development, storylines smooth as baldi and so much more
Overall, extraordinary miraculous portentous and marvelous!
Btw grammar mistakes are still present hopefully will fix.
Thanks for your hardwork!
I appreciate it.
And i wish you would spill sum gudass ConTEnT to keep up the hype..bye-
I liked the beginning of the story but after a while, the descriptions of the world weren't as good as they could've been. The worlds that he will travel to are good but I think you should make him travel to different worlds more.
I am not keen on writing o reviewing so I will just say that I love this story, I think It is great, and keep the hard work!! (5-star rating here, Tehee).
I love the story because it keeps the chapter entertaining pls update[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
falta que actualice mas seguido los capítulos por que abecés demora mucho como maximo 1 mes y medio o mas....................................................[img = monedas]
a good read one of the rare few I bothered reading till the end (at the time of writing there are only 89 chapters)
he starts off only slightly strong but ends up getting OP, unfortunately we dont really see him use his powers all that much except his sword skills.
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Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood.
I have created over a thousand useless reviews.
Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality.
I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews.
Yet, these hands will never hold anything.
So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
hey can anyone tell me does this has anything to do with the Vampire showing on the cover because I've read up to like around 40 chapters and so far it hasn't
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did u drop it?
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please continue its almost one month
still waiting for it
very good story, I really liked how it develops and it goes to other worlds ... I just think it started to take a long time to update, the last 20 chapters were posted over the course of 8 months ... anyway, I really liked the story and the changes in the original story line, I just hope that it is possible to have more chapters faster ...
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muy buena te apoyo todos los días pero. por favor no demores mucho en subir un cap..
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