Pls update already its been a month now you know
But really good story and a suggestion since you already added a dragon why not put prehistoric animals like dinosaurs or other mythical animals.
There are some potential in the story, but the grammar and interactions (and random info that pops up) along with the massive amount of exclamation marks makes one think that the author is using the older google translate with no editing.
You will get confused a lot while reading but the novel has its charms so i think its worth a shot, but author-san really needs an editor that could help out or possibly install Grammarly to aid him/her with their work.
Hopefully someone will clean up the early chapters and make it easier to read, but so far its a cute little story with a thick plot armor for the MC. ^^"
Please update the novel it's already December 26 please this novel is o e of my favorite........................ ......................... ..... ... .... ..... .... .. ........ ........ . ...........
Thank you guys for Review! But I have announcement! The way I describe my characters and building is lacking! Gumen! So, once I'm done with volume 1, I hope you overlook them >.< I'll do my best to describe things better on later chapters! I'm not angry cause I use so much exclamation point, but cause I'm excited that you guys pointed out my mistakes^~^ which I will improve for the best!!!!!
Sorry for the low rating but I couldn't give this novel more.
"One day, youβre 17 and youβre planning for someday. And then quietly, without you ever really noticing, someday is today. And then someday is yesterday. And this is your life."
- John Green.
Other than the grammar which has some serious issues theres also the extreme lack of details about damn near everything So i really cant give it a higher score than this unless I'm willing to just overlook these mistakes (which i wont). If these issues get better down the line id be more than willing to Edit my rating/review.
The world background of the story is like manga/anime Toriko where the monster is a hybrid of animal, food and plant. The difference is the MC is a farmer and he has OP farming tools (plot armor) and a system of course. A light novel to read and has harem ( I hope not ). The author need to improve his grammar and his lack of describing of characters like human (height/age/colour of eyes or hair/body shape like slim or plump), building (height/shape/colour/size) and monsters. Recommended for readers who prefer carefree MC, has OP weapon, monster taming+breeding+sprouting, weak enemies, strong MC from the start and kingdom building. Tbh, the one make my hype when reading this novel is what kind of plants will sprout whenever MC take care of it.
First of all I'm a fan of System. Second, dude, Gardener System? hahaha ... I loved it! Great fun. I did not expect to find a gardener's system. I even foresee fortunes and fortune's from that.
Your writing is so damn good. I assume it is in comparison with skilled writer outthere. I just wonder why this novel is still not well known. I hope Author-san will keep this novel alive. Don't drop this. The plot is good. Perhaps you can make the universe become bigger and detailed. Love this novel. Add to library !!!
Highly recommended for anyone who love farming story, the starting story side when MC is on earth on start is not that good but it gets MUCH better when he arrive at second World [and no its not rebirth or reincarnation]. 4 star for the author please do NOT drop this novel.
I love the concept, everything was fine, there's even daily updates, it's just that your writing quality have some problems, but it was understandable, anyone I just want to see a picture of coco, even drawing is fine, same to the felines
the most important thing in a novel to me is a good grammar and a steady release if you can do these two thing i will suport you in following your novel to the end thanks for now until i read and understand about it a bit more
Shameless review daw. but this novel is something I'm proud of. I can't update now because I'm busy and also, my only problem is I don't have good English. But I make sure to use a proper word that is easy to read and understand! Hopia likes it!
Shameless review. My brother likes to write something like this all the time. He got a good story but he doesn't have good grammatmrs, but I'll support you bro.
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