I will definitely love this.a hard reality thay needs answera matter of choice and decision.im wanting to have an ending that completes the answer to d situation
Hell, it is interesting. First, two chapters didn't catch my attention but then she was transmigrated and the wars.
You are good! I have absolutely no problem following your story so I will say keep it up!
Good luck!
I always vote everyday with my power stone. Please release the episode everyday........................Please..............Please...........Please.........Please
I need more chapter.Please release the chapter everyday :). I love the story line that you made. Please please please please release as soon as possible.
Ur novel is good but i hope u release many chapter. .xD.................................................................................
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*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*
Yay, I am the one to push you to the 10 review mark.;,;.
Constructive Criticism: I honestly have none... This novel was too well written for that.;,;.
Positive Feedback: Nothing was soo well done that I feel the need to point it out, but I will say that this is a well written story.;,;.
Personal Feedback: I will readily say that I like how well written this novel is, but I do apologize, the story just isn't for me... I will now be removing it from my library... I hope you however continue this story for your fans.;,;.
Okay so now I've read it, I can write review about it. It’s a very interesting novel. It has a unique feel to it. Some advice is for you to cut your paragraphs shorter. It’s not that bad when read on a pc, but on a phone or something of that sort, they are very large, making it hard to read.
Your writing quality seems fine and the background design is so-so with a eloquent touch.
Your usage of pronouns can ve somewhat confusing and I think some sentences might need to be rephrased, but overall, it's wonderful. Independent girls are my type of female leads.
The writing quality is good and the stability of upates are OK. You did mentioned that you would be posting 5-7 chapters a week. I'm reading yours using a laptop so it was fine but you might want to consider making it shorter for those who read using phones. Of course, this is completely up to your own comfort. :D
Character design is good so far, but while Hera appeared to be opinionated, her trust in her 'father' was so weak that she was left confused with Therion's words? I hope that was because of her "memory loss" . I would prefer to see a naughtier princess who would give him more trouble and not fall for his good looks so early in the story. Then again, that's me.
It was rather sad what happened to Shila. She seems like a good woman. Love can be devastating!
Looking forward to the next chapters. :)
Hi Guys,
Writing was one of my dream way back then but unfortunately it was a fleeting one that time hahaha. I had an opportunity because of WEBNOVEL to which I am so grateful at. I will shamelessly rate my first novel a 5 star (please allow me just this once). I know I still had a long way but I will try my best to do good novels. I'm currently back tracking and revising each chapters. I will be uploading probably 3 to 4 chapters a week to make sure I proofread it all well...
So if you found any mistakes, please do correct me. I would love to see comments, even it's a negative one, rather than seeing no comments at all. hehe
Thank you so much...
P.S.: Please do vote for power stone.. hehe
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It's good descriptions are good characters feel alive the world building is done nicely but break your paragraphs more it feels like I'm reading a wall of text and some minor grammar mistakes are there which you can correct them thanks!
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