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*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*
Constructive Criticism: I see that this novel has not been updated for the past 2 months... however, before that you kept up with updates quite well, I suggest trying your best to get back to regular updates (unless this story is finished, for I'm sorry but they don't have a way to tell unless you try to find it under completed novels list).
Positive Feedback: I see no issues other than this novel being for select people (more so than some I've seen) and having not updated... well written, well thought out story.;,;.
Personal Feedback: I will continue reading this novel.;,;.
Score: SoU 4/5 Rest 5/5
Its not that bad just because i liked WMW and this had a bit of feel in it though the story and everything is pretty bad, you should just read it to pass time if you like WMW
Was good while it lasted. Looks like its dead though. My guess is the author ran out of ideas. I'd say give it a try it's a bit like WMW so if you enjoyed that you'll prolly like this.
The English is really rough. Would not recommend. The story develooment was intriguing but do to grammatical errors I couldnt continue. If it was fixed it could be a great story. Maybe it gets smoother as it goes.
the story is awesome, the content overshadow the little problem in english,
we may be seing another great novel on par with WMW
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A supposed genius who speaks in broken English?
The experiment was never explained.
Missing many details.
Seems to give a lot of information in retrospect.
Has potential.
It's has a good base line for the story and make decent progress but could a bit longer also having more time with other character might help the mc grow more
This is a great book for previous Warlock of the Magus World readers.
The Author has made good modifications thus making the story new, fresh, and interesting.
Good
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Nice story.glad that i found another novel like warlock of the magus world.it would help you gather ten times the readers and power stone votes you presently have if you can improve the english and grammer.i assume that you lost atleast 80% of the readers after first few chapters because of bad grammer.improve on that.you have great potential to be an author
killercoolie