Reviews of Inequivalent Exchange by Sagesheep - Webnovel

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Ken_Ringdomstory
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DeJeL
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DeJeL

*Remember, this review is having only read the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: You have not updated for the last 3 months and have not given your readers proper explanation as to why. Positive Feedback: Well and strongly written story with a truly unique plot.;,;. Personal Feedback: I will continue reading this novel, though I hope it isn't for not seeing how long it's been since your last update.;,;. Score: SoU 3/5 Rest 5/5 Average 4.6/5
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SN7
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SN7

Iskai is a well-established genre, anyone who likes it will be able to understand what is happening from the beginning. However, lack of past tense during the narration is really off-putting. The grammar is not the worst by Qidian standards, I would say it's in the middle of the pack. The punctuation, however, is pretty jarring. Everyone started somewhere, and with practice, these problems can be easily taken care of. I would recommend the author to read some actual English novels, taking notes about the formatting and words used. And most importantly, write a lot! Good luck with the novel!
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Lukis_Aurelius
You have a great concept for a story and it is good that you are running with it. I wont hold back on any criticisms though: for one, feel free to take your time. The first few chapters just happened one thing after the next much like an exposition dump. Dont be afraid to slow down, take your time to really imagine the world and your charecters as real people who are living their real every day lives. I would suggest you split up your paragraphs so they are two to three sentances each. For webnovels most people read on their phone and that makes it easier to digest information, having it broken up instead of in bulk text. The last thing is, if you can tell the readers something without outright saying it, try and do that. For example when you talk about appearances, have other charecters bring it up naturally in dialogue. etc. I hope this is somewhat useful for you, I would highly reccomend checking out some of the big WN on this site and seeing how they write certain scenarios, after that you can find your own voice with your book
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killermniko
I like how chapter 1 sets the world setting and ch 2 sets the situation setting. The pace is quick for some, but I think it gives the feeling of being the MC. I like the thoroughness of the items and characters. Keep up the good work.
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BoredPanda
Good start, mystery kicks in, the way situations is described is good. Sentences are smooth... The only flaws are missing commas after a dialouge and some question marks and dots. Story is good, a bit unique concept. I think the current chapter is insufficient to outline the story, but it is only on Chapter 9....Overall, the story is good, how it progress will be how you want it, the flaws are only tbose that I stated.
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