I like your optimism and ideas and such.
Yes do that. Ignored the retards
Make clear to your goals, make the characters more real and the world it is instead being like a computer program or dead stone.
What I like about the story is that they're 'alive' instead shrugged off.
Really appreciate you man.
Keep it up.
Thanks for the explanation, and I hope you don’t feel rushed anymore, I’m happy whenever I get a chapter even if it takes a while! Good luck, and hope you have a great day!
Frankly, I would rather have a good story than an unedited hastily mash-up fragments of words. I have waited faithfully for every chapter of Mother of Learning ( two a month) for half a decade. I think they just want assurance that the story is not going to be abandoned.
The Seven Deadly Sins, the one with Meliodas, is perhaps a good option, seeing that the main enemy there is of evil origins and the world itself seems prone to "volatile influences".
RWBY also seems to have gained a surprisingly high popularity, fan-fic wise, but is plagued with a horrible focus on easily acquired harems that somehow makes people forget how the world is all about dealing with heavier than expected responsibilities through, and I quote, "friends' support".
Also, perhaps God Eater? Haven't watched it yet but the plot uhm... kinda fits? Who knows.
Oh, yeah! Can we have an encounter with a "counter-guardian" whom fell into mental disorder through memory pumping? The warning has been set since the beginning and even our MC slightly suffers from it.
don't feel pressured to write, i personally like quality more than quantity, so take your time and the most important thing is that you are happy with your own story.
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