Hello!๐
I am the author of Sweeter Than Fiction Thank you for checking out this novel that has been on hiatus for 3 years. I hope you enjoy the journey in the coming days.๐๐งก
Amazing..!!
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The plot is very intriguing and I am looking forward to more chapters. Just read a few chapters and it captivated me.
Well done author๐๐ Keep up the good work..โโ๐๐
The story's idea is good, so it's not surprising that so many people read it. The story is pretty interesting, and the scenes are well written. Kudos to you author. I'll add it to the library's collection. Your story is beautiful. It's a real page-turner. Good job!
Good Job authorr.
At first I thought she was giving birth then later realized that she was having a nightmare. ๐ญ๐ญ I need a good sense of imagination. ๐ gosh.โค๏ธโค๏ธ
Well done. ๐๐
The synopsis is great. The plot and characters are also interesting. I read few chapters and I am already hooked. It's totally right up to my alley. I really am looking forward to read more chapters. Keep up the good work.๐
I don't know what happened during the three years but your writing style is nice with little to no error. You've certainly improved and it shows in your writing. One small thing thoughโ and I think you're planning to change it laterโ is your book cover. It's fine, but it will garner more readers if it's eye-catching.
Also, no one has probably said it but congrats on overcoming a portion of your life and getting past your writer's block. Those two are a real pain if you ask me but at least you got over it ^-^
THIS GOT ME HOOKED AFTER READING THE FIRST CHAPTER AND THE NEXT AND THE NEXT TO NEXT AND THE NEXT AFTER THAT. I have eventually stop reading just to give a review. This book has its awesomeness, great description, perfect flow, not fast phasing and not too slow and everything in between. This is must read story. Trust me, it won't bore you, guys
The synopsis is great. The title is also very captivating.I read few chapters and I can't wait for more chapters to read. Seriously, great work author ๐
A nice book to read. Author has outdone herself the developmental structures of the novel. The suspense held at the beginning of the novel is enough to convince one of a beautiful read ahead. The only flaws spotted a few grammatical errors and typos but it doesn't deter one of a good read.
It is a novel that helps collective and individual memory:
"Sweeter than Fiction", Of course reality surpasses all narrative.
And the trigger is: A nightmare.
I'm a bit of a student of these cases because I do therapies with people who went through "this type of nightmare" and who couldn't lead a normal life. And it is an evil that affects several generations and degenerates from generation to generation. If not, see the biblical case of the flood: Why did Noah build the boat? (Because practically all of humanity at that time had "sexual nightmares")
Congratulations to its author, of which: "two things" caught my attention: (1) the name: "bitter Luisa" and (2) the cover; because it had a white background with big black letters.
I would like to continue reading, if it is a psychological essay.
A story revolved around traumas of the past and forbidden romance ๐ค With a touch of mystery that the author manipulated well in the early chaps.
There isnโt much to complain about with this novel other than the tense inconsistency, the author continuously alrernates between the present tense and the past (Hope that get fixed soon), but otherwise, itโs a nice read with close to perfect flow. ๐
The authorโs descriptive skills are on point, easily appealed to all five senses but I wish the cover did more for the eyesโฆitโs kind of bland for a romance novel ๐คทโโ๏ธ
I am very curious to know what might have happened to the FL's oast๐ค.. Also the ML is in love with his brother's wife ๐ฒ๐ฒ... I think l should read the whole story to know what will exactly happen.....
Other then the error mistakes everything is nice and fresh l can tell so far.....
All the very best author and keep going๐
That boy is the worst!! How could he do that to the poor little girl?!๐ค๐คthe MC should get her revenge on him and make him pay for what he had done to her for the rest of his life. Never forgive him, you hear me, MC? You did a very good job at making me invested with the storyline, so keep up author๐๐ป
It is great,I like the novel. I've seen some improvement but still some error, anyway I like it, its very interesting. The names are confusing because I'm not used to it. I'll try and understand. Thumps up, great novel.
I would love to a book cover that fits your story, as it holds hella potential.
Characters little action are building a intrigued environment and story's development is stable and enjoyable.
bitterlouise