A Grimm Eternity (RWBY Fan-fiction) AGE (RWBY)

In the dark and illustrious manor shrouded in the evening mist, beneath the veil of goodwill and hospitality lies the home of an infamous gathering of individuals who crave nothing more than to be one with the Grimm. They call themselves “The Brotherhood of Grimm” lead by their master Arthur Watts, and like the Grimm they seek to wipe clean this world of its impurity. To usher a new age of pure terror and eternal sorrow as they follow the path laid out to them by their Queen.
But our story starts underneath this manor, in the cold and pale facility that lies beneath the surface. In one of the many cells where the test subjects lie in wait for a glimmer of hope to reach them, or for death to rip them away from this eternal hell. Tucked away in the corner hoping to hide from his impending fate, lies a frail and terrified child whose future will decide the fate of humanity.
Will this child bring humanity back from the brink of despair? Or will the darkness consume them all.

This will be my first Fan-fiction so I need as much critique as possible to learn and grow as a writer. I hope you Enjoy and I'll do my best to keep the chapters coming as evenly as possible! :D