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MamichulaB
I really enjoy this story,erza is a young ambitious girl and I really like her personality though I had a doubt about her killing the Rage members,can't wait for the remaining chapters and characters yet to come
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yuzukieba
The character of Erza keeps evolving. The story in Mirage city is the part I am well surprised. Very nice story. I will wait for the next chapter (excited).
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Chuluo
I love this novel, the plot is different from all those cultivation novel with a female mc where is only schemes and retards enemies. I hope it continue like that.
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Erinyes
Writing Quality: Not so hot. Quite a few mistakes but readable.
Stability: Good.
Story Development: Bad. She's pretty much had ZERO hardships and pretty much begins to surpass everyone. The power gain is just... just stupid.
Character Design: Pretty bland because of story progressing really quickly.
World background: Lacking but has the potential to get better.
Overall, the MC is obviously modeled off of Fairy Tail's Erza which honestly leaves a bad taste. She's young but acts much older and yes, we can attribute some to Samsara but still... there's none of the struggles that one would expect a child to have upon having the info. The characters are not really elaborated on.
Needs balance and more thought. It's okay but is definitely lacking. Hopefully author reflects on his work AND reads the work of other good novels to get insights on writing styles, plot progression, and character development.
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cpham980
The story is really well written, and I love how the author has paced it. Though the story has hints of the reincarnation trope, it maintains it's uniqueness with its twist on the idea and refreshing FL. Would definitely recommend giving this a try.
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PandaCookie
Story is reasonably interesting (MC is OP since the beginning but doesn't always go all out so things at least 'seem' challenging which is typical of OP MCs), character interaction/agendas are believable, and the world is explained pretty early on without feeling like an info dump...
Only possible downside is the romance which is rather ambiguous and feels like she's playing beer pong with 4 cups at the end of a 10m long table while blindfolded...
She obviously doesn't know what she wants (this coming from someone who saw future possibilities of her own life and seems to remember decent parts of those potential futures) or maybe the author was secretly polling the comments to see what people wanted which ended in this harem-like situation we currently have (*gags and nearly dies from boredom*)
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All this being said, I have personally lost interest shortly after the tomb arc started which is sad because it had so much potential earlier in the story after the first competition but slowly started regressing towards "meh" since a little before the 2nd competition (arrived at "full blown meh" by the tomb arc's start)
I may return in the future if I run out of other works and/or there are more chapters to binge...
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jettski
This is my second time making a short review for a novel. Even though there are short number of chapters as of now, the story still makes me feel that its already a hundred chapter. I'm liking the development of each character. I hope in the end the male lead character will belong to Beel ❤ Because only the strongest Man can become the MC's Male Lead ❤
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Wayseeker
Interesting concept. Good writing quality. Most charakcters have a good design. Keep it up with the good work! -______________________________________________-
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Aikyanaik
Only reason iam on webnovel is because of this story ... It's really good and I just love it ❤️ though we rarely get mass release still it's worth to wait for chapter patiently because every new chapter has its own uniqueness , it's has thrilling ,it's surprising as well as it has values . So overall even in all the busy sedulous of mine I still make time to read it .... Thanks author for giving wonderful story ❤️
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ahmed7023
The story is good and intriguing, writing has small mistakes sometimes. Character building, introduction and especially fighting scenes are comprehensive creating utmost pleasure in reading and visuallizing. In short, a perfect novel.
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Daoist_Introvert
Im lazy so here’s five stars,
But for real doe. It’s a great read so far (chap 75) and instead of most other novels with a FL it’s rather noticable that she does things her self and isn’ a hypocrit! And for the rest just read it. Ya won’t regret it!
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Covbel
Kinda special
but really nice
Really good story with a good plot
The background of the story is well explaint and the protagonist is really fun to follow
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Hwanvan14
Love the story and characters especially the female lead. World buliding is great too. Although some parts of the story development is either fast or was not fully expounded and while reading there was a chapter of the story which actually reminded me or i find it similar to a certain chinese novel. But overall i really love reading the novel. Hoping that updates will be stable and hopefully the author won't drop the story halfway like most original novels. Looking forward reading future chapters. More power to the author 🙌
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d_jacques
I rate this story 5⭐ in action. Not for gore but for excellently written and highly descriptive fight scenes. It leaves you feeling absolutely satisfied after "watching" the fights yet looking forward for what comes next.
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FucckThis
So far is good. Keep it up author-san!!!
#Fck 140 character #Fck 140 character #Fck 140 character #Fck 140 character #Fck 140 character
#Fck 140 character #Fck 140 character #Fck 140 character #Fck 140 character #Fck 140 character
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brackenbeeny
To be concise this novel avoids the most horrendous cliches and some plot holes to give what I think is a more likely story of what would happen if a MC actually has power, they get helped not suppressed. Worth a read just for the refreshing beginning. However encounters could be more fleshed out and conversation less stuttery and cringy
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valwitty
Your story is breath taking
I am speechless 👋👋👋👏👏👏👏👏👏👊👊👊👊👊👊👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👊🤛🤛👐👐🙌🙌✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Am3lia
The premise of the story revolves around a girl named Erza. When she is 6 yrs old she is tested by a samsara stone and it asks her what kind of Empress she will become. She goes through many scenarios ruling by force, ruling by kindness, by diplomacy and so on. Unlike the other children who take the test she remembers most of what happened there. So it is awkward for her when she meets someone in real life that she was married to and was betrayed by in her samsara dream
I don’t want to reveal to much because I hate revealing spoilers. But the story has a nice pace. There are demons. 1/2 demons, magic, family and friendship. It moves at a nice pace. This is not what I would consider a cultivation novel, I would go with more fantasy action adventure. Hopefully a little more romance down the road, we have already seen a little already. There is a lot on intrigue and not knowing who has what agenda.
So far from what I can tell the author puts out regular releases. Also responds when needed in the comments to help clarify the story or listens to criticism. Has had open communication about if there were going to be delays and when there might be possible mass release. Oh the only improvement/ complaint I’d have is needing an editor, but it is not that bad, so do not let that hold you back from reading.
Well so far I’m really enjoying the story.
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PassingTourist
So far, the story has been interesting. The MC is searching to understand herself while climbing up the ranks of the strong. The character development is even paced, without any major info dump. The romance aspect seems a little stiff. The male characters that have been introduced so far don't seem to have the right connection with the MC. Overall, I'll keep reading this one.
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Kingdakad
So far so good! Have been binge reading, almost out of chapters! I would really like to know how strong Beel is and what the future holds for our main character. Feed me more please! :D
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TunaSwapChoco
I'm reading this, and giving a 5-star review 'cause the MC is named "Erza".
If you didn't know, Erza is a character from FairyTail, who is also one of my favorite characters! But another reason why I'm giving this novel a 5-star review is because I'm sure this novel has potential! Gud Luk author!
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Reade11
This novel is the best original I have ever read!! I love the fact that the Protagonist is a strong independent and inspiring woman!!!!! I love how she overcomes every obstacle comes her way and is victorious most of the times but when she isn't she uses it as a lesson for personal growth.
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Wafflezz
Quite good. There is lots for the author to develop in terms of the storyline since Erza has so many unanswered details about her.
Battle scenes can get long and boring so I generally skip over them.
Looking forward to the future plot development
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TheSupreme
A good novel to read and it has a female character that is not any worst than any other mcs in other novels. Maybe even better. I strongly hope that people will read and enjoy this novel.
A little spoiler, I think the mc is Erza from Fairy Tail or her descendant. But this is just my thoughts so it maybe wrong. But her personality is as strong as Erza from Fairy Tail.
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ChampionLio
Wow what could I say? This is an absolutely hidden gem. I can't believe it remained in such a low rank. The writing quality has been improving chapter after chapter, and 1 chapter / day is really fast for original novel. The story is interesting and i hooked me up after a few chapters. As for the character? It is reasonable. The MC is still growing up and acted like someone in her age. Overall, it's 5 out of 5. Keep it up author-sama!
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Heart77
It looks promising. The flow of the plot is good and the characters' development is progressing slowly as should be for 12-13 year old children they are now. The talent test of the clan let me get a small glimpse of what can happen in the future to Erza, and the rest is left to expectations for the author in making a good story. Elsa, Qi Long, Mozart and the others can or will play a big role in later parts of the story.
But I think you need an editor as some phrases and sentences are incorrect and some words can be replaced.
I will write a review later or edit this one later on with the later developments.
Overall, it's promising.
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Null4One
Wow. This is pretty good. For some reason, the best novels here are often the worst ranked. I selfishly want it to remain that way. I don't want others to distract and rush the author. Quality over quantity.
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Redcast
Excellence in words, I rarely read novels that are all-rounder.
But this one is clearly one of those; be it characters stories and development, fight scenes or even places descriptions; everything is fit in a perfect way.
Except some mispelled words, but that's rare.
Keep it up, you're doing an amazing job.
P.S: It would be great if you can release two or three chapters per day!
:)
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Sonamey
Loved it. This fiction is truly a hidden gem!! I did not expect the novel to be this good. It really should have more exposure than what it currently has.
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