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Preying_Devil
I really hope someday you write a new novel or maybe, recreate this novel and continue it. it was great till it last. just get to give this piece a rating. it was worth every time, I spend.
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ABSenior
Even though book is hiatus. it was really good. so I'll say read it. it was worth it for me. --- evil, rational cold, cruel, Pragmatic, ambitious, dark. no harem, no love of any sort. smart characters and nice world building.
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Gustavo_Silva_0811
Mais por favor mande mais capitulos numca vi uma historia tao bem feita e lenda de ser ler essa historia e tao exitante parabens 👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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MagnuS
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MagnuS

I've read up to 11 chapters and I think I've gotten a good understanding of the authors method of writing. Let's begin There are many things while reading that I've noticed could've been much better explored in this story. For example the author instead of having the Mc do research and show us his progress just skips it and says that the combined intelligence of the Mc made him able to recreate the extremis serum, captain America serum. He could've done some research before checking if his body could handle having 2 serums before injecting but whatever. It also never showed us the process at all. Which in my opinion is important. He did this with a few more things. Such as the soldier serum, armor, weapons etc... He basically just summarizes it up in a couple of words. "I hacked into this super hard to crack database using my Ai, using my combined intelligence I was able to crack it in 2 days and Inject myself with it without any problems. See what's wrong with this? The author doesn't show us him injecting himself nor him discovering new methods for himself. It feels like he just wrote it for wish fulfillment. It has massive potential I don't doubt that but the author is merely wasting it if he continues like this. Now my other point is pretty similar to what I said above. The fic is not very descriptive at all. Just go read a few chapters and you'll see what I mean. While this is a good read for evil Mc lovers it needs massive work to actually be good imo. Maybe if the author rewrote it, it would be better I don't know.
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latheef_shaik
not your virgin author story. it is written recently that giving only 5 stars would be a crime. He needs much appreciation for the 50 chapters alone although I wish he could make much stories like this in future
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sethrohan
only read if you want a pure power fantasy. I dont mind having evil or selfish mcs but those are literally the only character traits this guy has! the pacing is also way to fast.
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sideface
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Miguelito_Aquino_3223
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Kutu
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Kutu

Evil Tony Stark? 5 Stars by defaultEvil Tony Stark? 5 Stars by defaultEvil Tony Stark? 5 Stars by defaultEvil Tony Stark? 5 Stars by defaultEvil Tony Stark? 5 Stars by default
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CharaWingdings
MOAR! GIVE ME MORE! Do you mind? I'm busy doing the Fish Stick. It's a very delicate state of mind!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE! Do you mind? I'm busy doing the Fish Stick. It's a very delicate state of mind!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE! Do you mind? I'm busy doing the Fish Stick. It's a very delicate state of mind!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE! Do you mind? I'm busy doing the Fish Stick. It's a very delicate state of mind!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE! Do you mind? I'm busy doing the Fish Stick. It's a very delicate state of mind!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!
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Vishnu_S_9311
Good story line andbplut mc is one smart ass even harem is a perfect small harem .5 starrer novellll brook neede morreeeeee chapptterrrrss weree are theyyyyyyyyyy
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VinixxVidixxVici
Perfect story. Tomy uses all of his powers and all possibke advantages. just wish that the author was more knowledgeable about the seriously overpwoered charectErs
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VinixxVidixxVici
My favorite story ever. The sheer amount of genius and entertainment balanced properly is such a miracle that I can’t believe it. I hope that everyone enjoys this masterpiece
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TazmanianDevil1997
Loved what I have read and would like to ask is there anything like this in any other fic anywhere because I like and obviously the authors not gunna come back and write it after so long
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Sethnut
Splish Splash 140 CHaracter limit is trash Splish Splash 140 CHaracter limit is trash Splish Splash 140 CHaracter limit is trash Splish Splash 140 CHaracter limit is trash Splish Splash 140 CHaracter limit is trash Splish Splash 140 CHaracter limit is trash Splish Splash 140 CHaracter limit is trash Splish Splash 140 CHaracter limit is trash
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Dakie_Salamander
Really good. Awesome. Before our Tony everyone is p**sy. He toys with everyone and takes what he wants when he wants. But he is also able to give up powers (he gave up infity stones to Infinity). And Hela is AWESOME! P.S.: Epic vivid s*x scenes, fight scenes, and substantial upgrades that follows canon and makes sense (atleast in Marvel multiverse). I hope he will get to different universes like DC... but who knows...
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SeJob
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хорошая историю вы придумали, мне понравился хотя немного жопа сгорел когда понял что автор садист( садистка) хорошая историю вы придумали, мне понравился хотя немного жопа сгорел когда понял что автор садист( садистка) хорошая историю вы придумали, мне понравился хотя немного жопа сгорел когда понял что автор садист( садистка)
4yr
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the_squacker
Not bad, not bad
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Mark_Kieran
I really enjoyed this story there isn't many dark self insert let alone a dark Tony stark self insert I really love seeing well developed power in characters
4yr
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Maurz
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Maurz

Have nothing against the author. Just trying to filter out all the stupid ass spam reviews that are unnecessary with another spam review. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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ZzAaZzOo777
Thank you Author sosososososo much for making this beautiful novel Please keep up the good work 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️🙇‍♂️
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SeaVen
DAMN GOOD !!!! UPDATE PLS !!! ILL GIVE THIS GEM 5 STAR !!! read this novel so that u reader will know what a true geniuse author is like !!!! Is my spelling right?? Dont have an urge 2 check dictionary ... oWeLL DAMN GOOD!!!!!!!!!
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shutup_takemymoney
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AsuraDeus
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anger
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anger

Overall amazing book like all the others the author has made, the Protagonist ain’t a pussy or a spineless coward. Plus the author actively supports dark mc novels. Good job man, hopefully you start updating soon.
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Zuupiq
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Zuupiq

Pretty good😄👍....,.........,.............................................................fhdhdhdhdhsuzbcbchxudhdbddbudxhxhxudhdbddjdjdbdjfhcbfbchcighfbfififbdnfidhdgsjsjdh
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FruitlessEndeavour
It's Good!There was never really any outstanding Evil Tony Stark fanfictions out there until this one came along. Although the pace is too fast and the descriptions are that amazing, it is still enjoyable that's what counts ultimately. But I want more updates plzzzzzzzzz!!
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Taoist_Ouroboros
One of my favorite web-novels of all time you took an awesome concept and made it better with your writing skill and most importantly your consistent with your character and powers. I would recommend to every I now.
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usernanne
Its no "with a System" story which is good. But that is the only positive quality I could find. This story is all about having an unrealistically over powered MC that can do anything 100 times better than the original Tony Stark. Having a good story is not the focus here.
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