Reviews of Forbidden Alpha

13 Reviews

4.83

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ShaNnia
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4mth
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Asia_L_Rivera
Watching Ally come into her character was amazing. The twist and turns in this story hooked me in chapter one. This is a great book. I love her love story and the transitions she made in between and when she lost her memories it was a great throw off.
6mth
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Asia_L_Rivera
Watching Ally’s story come to us great. This book is a good read and keeps your attention. There is love, thrills and adventure. My favorite part of this book is her falling in love with her daughter.
6mth
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Hannah_Grant
You will fall in love and feel like you are there with her. I love how each character makes you feel like you have someone like them in your own life. Cant wait for more
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6mth
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Jessica_Munivez
So I’m love with this book..can’t wait for new chapters!! I’m fascinated with Vampire,werewolf,alpha,Luna Characters Wish I had the visual mind to write something as wonderfully written as this book
7mth
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Star_Barth
This is an amazing story I just wish the author would update more frequently/ steadily. It’s been a month with no update. The way they write is amazing and the storyline is also amazing but with the author not updating it makes you not want to read it
10mth
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Zamo80
It's always great to see Ally nd Luna working y together. Nice storyline very enjoyed the updates. Please keep blessing us with more chapers
11mth
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Zamo80
Wow after a very long time thank you for the update. Leah only needed to be smacked hard. Who does she think she is. Now Luna is taking over Ally do need to rest nd recuperate.
1yr
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Zamo80
Pheww can she just admit it... it would be lovely to see them together again. POWER COUPLE... they are mated together...masterpiece. it would be lovely to see them together again. They are🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥together. YingYabg
1yr
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Zamo80
Dammmit things are heating up Jesus. This is getting exciting I can't wait any longer for update . This is crazy as hell I'm glad Liam was found by the King Pack he is safe. Now may we rescue our Queen please
1yr
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Bresodia
I truly love this story. Wish she would have made some choices differently but that is life and I guess would cause the story to be different. Over this is an amazing story I would recommend to anyone.
1yr
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MuffinDiety
Never break eye contact. Establish dominance. ...............................................................................................................................
1yr
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Mutiga
Life is funny... ooh this world is cruel. it doesn't choose young or older, punished even innocent. Happiness n bitterness, love n hatred lies n truth take part in it. Desires n lust make pple to kill for selfish reasons. My happiness is this all comes to shape n teach us. Thanks, requesting for more chapters
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