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quattiner
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dusty_angel
Review Swap! Sorry it took so long.
Writing: 4/5
Wow, nice writing! I barely saw any grammar slip ups, but a little proofreading could benefit the story. Also, great job keeping the tense consistent. It is rare to read a story in present tense. Sadly, its not really my cup of tea. I prefer stories told in the past tense, solely because I find it easier to read.
Update Stability: 5/5
No complaints here. I'm impressed you've been writing since last year!
Story Development: 4/5
The plot is interesting and has potential. I'm interested to see which direction the story is gonna go.
Character Design: 4/5
The MC can be a bit OP and his personality a bit arrogant, but I want to see how he will grow throughout the story. More imagery could be used to describe the characters though. There are a lot of names, but not enough description for me to imagine how they look.
World Background: 4/5
The world is interesting, but I'm curious, does this take place in modern times? Future? Where did these "Damn" come from? What are the Damn Hunters? I have a lot of questions about the world. More explanations would be helpful. Hopefully it will be described more as the story progresses.
Overall, this story has potential. Keep up the good work!
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abel_cxpher
Really great book....Exceeded my expections....m expecting more becos am still yet to finish the chapters released......and I love the plot....everything including the characters were perfect....nice novel...
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PeachyPearl
It was intriguing from the beginning chapter itself. Action! Yup just my kind of thing. I'm really very happy to read and review your work. It's just Mamamia!!!! Keep it coming. Feed me more.
Author, are you a magician? The scenes with detailed explanation just transmigrated me to your world. Haha. Loved it.
Not giving any spoilers so that your readers won't pass from here itself and will read it.
Do read it people it's worth your time.
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Bikash2410
Lot's of potential in the story and i like how you are able to describe the details....... I wish you good luck and can't wait to read further
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K_A_U
Loving the story so far.
I'm not really used to books like this, and it was a nice relief.
The story line is really interesting, and I like where its headed.
The author is doing a great job so far, can't wait to read more.
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Missbrie
I am not normally into this genre but this book had me from the beginning. I love the action and the humour of the MC. 10/10 would recommend.
The writing quality is strong and the description places you into the MC world, almost like you can see it yourself.
Love this :)
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yunisao
I enjoyed reading this novel! It has a good concept and interesting plot. I do think there are some things that could be better like grammar. Also the flow of events could have better transitions. But you can tell
the author is working hard on improving their writing as you read along.
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Nzoputa
Loved this story.
It was a great read, most esp seeing as its not what I'm used to.
The story line was good and the chapter length as well.
The author did a great job, although there were some errors here and there. But what can I say, nobody is perfect.
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PsyberRose
A story with a lot of potential. If you like demon hunter, an OP MC, a dorkable sidekick type of stories, then this is the one for you.
Writing Quality: It's not bad, and it's an easy read. 5* as Author is continuously improving and you can see that the quality between first chapter and later chapters have improved greatly..
Stability of Updates: 5* as author delivers as promised.
Story Development: It's a good build-up. It's not a ****** 'hunt-bash' type of story, as it also shows some human interaction of his daily life.
Character Design: 4* as there's not much real description about the characters themselves. I can see their personalities but it feels a bit 2D to me due to the lack of description of emotions or things like that. So you can't truly emphatize or bond with them.
World Background: 5* just cuz the damn are cute.
Keep on writing to fuel the passion!
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DragonTreasures
Hey, not a bad tale! From the first chapter to the last chapter it's clear you're getting much, much better! I think to make it flow smoother you just need to improve your grammar and sentence variation.
Other than that, keep writing everyday, and learn from the best authors you can find. Try and spot the differences between their work, and your own, and bridge the gap, bro.
Keep it up~~~
Edison_