Reviews of My Flower, My Muse by MiaoMiao11 - Webnovel

where did the reborn as a mom go? ................... .........................................................

Even though I've only read the few chapters, what I've read so far is really good. Author just needs to update more, but I get that she's writing other books. It's a really promising story

Your story got me curious. You know at first I didn’t think it would be a good one but the second chapter pinned me on the chair. I read all of your chapters. This is awesome😁. Hope to see more chapters.

Great story. Although there isn't much to go on, I do like the direction that it's heading towards. Thank you author for deciding to not drop it anymore.

Note: The writer's first language isn't English. First time trying to write. If you can't overlook the grammatical mistakes, then this isn't for you. Otherwise, it has potential, and the characters aren't half baked. I recommend anyone who can look past the grammar, and see the story underneath to give it a whirl, and help the author improve, because she's learning! That's all I have to say, milord signing out!

Writing quality: Be careful, I had to read again many sentences to understand what you wanted to say. Some sentence structure is wrong too. Be careful with punctuation too. You often forgot dot or comma. Lastly, you should separate your paragraph better. Because of it, the flow of your story is disturbed and it’s a shame. But it’s still okay. I saw worst. And I’m not the best to judge you since it’s my weak point too. Story: I think the main couple is well worked and their romance at first didn't seem forced. It was natural. I liked the humor that you integrated here and there in a natural way. On the other hand, I found some moments hard to follow. I wasn’t sure anymore if the story was taking part in the past or present (chapter 4). Maybe because of writing quality in a way. And to end, the flow of the story seems quick. I wonder if you’ll able to intrigue us with this space. Character: The MCs are well craft. Each of them have their strong and weak point. And they are cute together. Doubtless, your strongest point on the story. Overall, good work. Your novel has potential, don’t give up.